The whole series is amazing, I really love this. It's so saddening.

This is awesome!

Just like the others!

Wanted to know ...

IS THERE GONNA BE ANOTHER SEQUEL?

huh!huh!

*sniff sob*

that was so sad, yet happy at the same time

at first i thought that they were going to break up

and you're really good at writing romantic scenes

*sigh* that's where i envy you lol

that was definately one of my favorites

the whole series you wrote was FABULOUS!

thx and keep up the good work

)

That ending was so sweet. It was sad reading the chapter where he saw Asuka-after she was dead. I'm glad Fubuki was able to talk some sense into him. Like I said in my last review, it is a tragedy that Asuka is gone but he still has that part of her in his son. Amazing ending, amazing story.

Sorry it took me so long to get back to this. Majorly busy. OMG, poor Asuka! Poor Edo. But at least it isn't a double tragedy because the baby's fine. So even though he lost Asuka, he's still got a part of her left with little David. :) I promise I won't take as long finishing the rest of the story.

Ya, know what you're really really cruel ...

CAN'T STOP FRIGGIN CRYING!

oh...oh...WAH!

please make another...

T.T That was so sad. I'm very happy David was alright but I'm sad Asuka died -cries- Still That was a fantastic story. Bravo!

This is the first story I've read that actually made me cry. I was sobbing when Asuka died. That's really sad but your story was amazing. Keep up the good work!

Aw that was a sweet ending, even though I'm still sad Asuka died.

OH MY GOD SHE DIED? Poor Edo...[crying].

"Tch, yep. Just as I thought. How predictable. Hey Kaiser, looks like your f**k buddy's joining you, after all."

...Oh. Oh, my. That's...um...some way to end the whole thing, huh? What happened to Asuka...can that REALLY happen? Did you research it and everything?

I...don't know what more to say. Sorry. - -

T.T

OMG. She died. I can't believe it. Joined the fate of Ryo.

This is, just, too, TOO, good of a fic.

I luff you, meadow-san. I love this. It made me cry...

for exampled

Men plus labor equals absolute idiots...

I didn't know Edo was a unicorn though

Funny chapter because it was all so true..well other than the unicorn thing

"...Hm. That's a pretty strange time to go into labor, right after having sex. Way to go, Phoenix. You popped her uterus."

Oh, hush! Sorry I (we) haven't been around! Is the baby gonna live? What about Asuka? You said Edo's mother died giving birth to him; does that mean that the past is gonna repeat itself?

"Well, if it does, remember this, Phoenix: Kaiser's up there where all the dead people go, and when the lady dies, then he can screw her all he wants."

I am so glad you decided to continue this saga. In the beginning, I was worried Edo and Asuka were going to get divorced. Now I'm wondering if the baby is going to be okay. Keep up the good work.