This was actually really well done. I like the whole teenage party stuff. IT worked very very well.
KInda hot too xx

Despite the fact that one of my pet hates is the use of 'in the past' type sub headings, I enjoyed this.
I really REALLY dont think you need to use them. Without it, your writing flows perfectly anyway.
xx

All's well that ends well...cannibals, panthers or leopards oh my... and when all's said and done, there's Cloud talking to "...you in there. You better be a boy 'cause I can't handle any more girls." Did all this stuff really happen? Or are you just making it up! Can't trust writers, these days...they're apt to say almost anything for a virtual bit of tail... thx mc

The whole story was very believeable and beautifully written. The ending left me satisfied with the whole thing. Thanks for sharing :] I was addicted from ch 1. Now I have to get to work reading another one of yours, got a busy summer ahead of me! Thanks again! :D

Haha the whole leopard reminded me of Jacob and Bella in Twilight, with the familiar eyes and sturf. I trust you to turn him back :P

The Ch 7 flower analogy was really good, great depth to the story :]

Awh the first "moment of attraction" between cloud and tifa was so cute :]

Omg, this is so good so far! Aah! -goes to read more-

Aww!! It's so sweet!! I love the ending!! Sorry it took me so long to finish the story, but I was busy... sorry!

Tifa, tell 'em like it is girl! Yeah!

I'm gonna reread it again tomorrow!!

Dawn

Argh! Are all your stories this good lol? Haha... I'll read more tomorrow, gotta go today!! :D

Good job!

Yuffie, you're my idol!

Tifa, remember to kick Cloud where it hurts most if he ever hurts you. I don't care that you love him - kick him! HARD!

Aeris, what the hell are you doing?? You're stealing Cloud away from Tifa!!

Cloud, you bastard!
I WILL BE BACK!
Dawn

oh...my... god! this story is like flipping amazing! im not even kidding! that's really all i've got to say! :D and haha! Cloud's funny! like in ch. 27 and saying the reason why Tifa could touch him was becuz he sleeps with her! that was funny! it made break out in giggles! haha! :D

luve,
Fairy!

Finally, i read it til the end, and i dont regret it! Really i dont regret it, thank you for this awesome story!

one of the best stories I've read. I really loved this story. you're one of the best cloti authors. !epic! i loved everything!

:D

Crap I'm tired. I think you know what I mean! xD

Yes you do bring two cliffhangers! xD But necessarily if someone knows FF7 the second one isn't really a cliffhanger. Anyways, the story is still amazing.
Love.