me and you have the same exact name and by the way i love your stories that u have written

that was awesome i loved all the stories that u have made my mom is even putting me on restriction

what kind of animal is gabe

OMC this is gonna rok

Wow I loved it! So Arianna has stopped aging?

Your ideas are so brillaint! (: Good job.

o_O Does that mean Arianna will outgrow Gabe? Hmm, I like the names.

Arianna is pure and holy, and Gabriel's name is from the Bible. ^^

So young to be in love! Fifteen? lol ^^

THAT WAS EPIC!

I swear if you wrote about Madeline Khinlock's love life, son/daughter and how the world would explode with the number of half vampire half human hybrids, I would most definitely still devour all of what you write in NO time!

AWESOME WORK!

It's so weird for me to think of Edward as a dad to a teenager (a 30 yr old teenager) but you're doing a good job, he's still Edward. I was just wondering, is there a reason he refers to Bella as Bella and not "your mom" to Arianna? Just wondering, maybe it's to keep up the charade. Anyhoo, love the chapter!! The fireflies in the forest WAS magical -- much better than what I expected. LOVE it!

I'm picturing him leading her to a scenic overlook -- perhaps over a lake, the sun setting in the distance. Not very original -- just kidding, I have no idea!!

I'm very intrigued as to who Gabriel's master could be -- hm... Very nice chapter!! And the kiss ... love it!

Yay!! And the plot gets thicker -- boy, Gabriel reminds me a teeny bit of Edward. Maybe they'd get along, if Gabriel wasn't dating his daughter and, oh yah, he wasn't a vampire hunter. *shrugs*
Great chapter!! I must keep reading!!

Oh - good one! Didn't see this coming! But they could definitely use some newborn strength right about now...

Withdrawls...oh, this won't be pretty. But can Arianna's healing powers help?

Wow - this is good! Well done with a new set of star-crossed lovers!