This is a good story and you're a great writer. How could the baby be Jude's if he was in America for two years?

So I like Jude and my friend likes him too but my friend hates Molly but I don't see what's wrong with her but I like Jude!

Now, this story is is great to see the events told from Mollys give an alternative watching ATU, many people jump to the conclusion that she is a whiny bitch, that she hooked up with Phil right after Jude left and that she is already pregnant of Phil but...the film never tells any of that, it leaves that plot-line open ended and you gave it a good use.I love the way Jude is depicted in this story, he seems more insightful instead of just being glorified.I could sympathize with Molly in this story, though I felt like yelling at her and telling her to wake up in some get to learn something about Phil in this story, he can be a very nice finally, Molly naming the baby Jude, if was in her situation I wouldnt name the baby after his father, but I can understand why she did, besides, if you decide to continue the story, the baby being named Jude can bring more plotlines.I specially wonder how Jude would react after learning that Mollys baby is named he ignore it? will he decide to stay with Molly? will he react some other way? maybe he will never even find out about it and Molly will end up with Phil and they will raise the baby as if he was Phils.

You know, I actually like Molly a WHOLE lot more than Lucy. I can totally understand this as being a total canon story for her. I just loved it.

an amazing story will there be more?

Oh man do update.

I want to know more that happen.

Like, if Jude ever learns that that' his kid?

Oh! I was so happy to find this! Molly is probably the most interesting and least explored characters in the movie. I feel so terrible for her! I wondered why everybody thinks of Jude as this perfect guy...they just forget about Molly. At least Lucy's boyfriend DIED, you know?

Anyway, this is actually the first time I've ever liked Phil! He's so sweet and almost helpless about the whole situation.:S I don't like the baby being named Jude. I mean, it's good as part of the story, but I don't like that Molly did it. I don't know how to explain that :S

Another well-written chapter! Very interesting that she had her baby right after speaking with Jude, and that she never actually told him that it wasn't Phil's baby.

And Phil! He's sweet, getting her a car and everything to take her to the hospital...

You make Jude into such a bastard in this... it's fab :D

Truly truly fab that you're not making him into the "good guy" like everyone else and showing how much of an asshole he is to Molly, how he never considered her feelings.

Ooh! A Molly story!

I don't understand why people are so awful about her, I mean, nothing she really did was horrible. And Jude cheated on her first so... yes.

Same with Paco for that matter but nobody's about to listen to any attempts to try and humanize him so it doesn't matter XD

This kind of makes me think of Cynthia and John in a way, the fact that Molly had to change a lot just to get Jude to notice her, like when Cynthia dyed her hair blonde to make sure John would be happy and such.

Wonderfully done C: