Bwahah! That's so random!

rape them with a thoothbrush
odd but funny
i liked the 69
it twas hawt

Hahahaha, that was funny!
I SO did not expect Itachi to breakdown crying! xD
You're very right about the overused and boring ideas that you mentioned on your profile.
I agree. AkaSaku sucks.

lol, poor itachi, and when zetsu ate the girl that was killed by a toothbrush X'D

Lol, very... random. But in a good way!

Nice. This is so funny! XD

XD*D's go on forever*
OH MY GOD that was funny! XDD
I love crack. XD

Keep writing!
I ever remain your obedient reader, Emily, the Slytherin Princess

HAHAHAHA! This was funny as hell! and yeah! Totally Toothbrush rape! and lol, you know Daydrifter's stories as well? Totally awesum! I give this a 5 out of 5!

O_o Wow that was uber funny if not a bit scary. Love the Zetsu-babies! (^^)

xD Random, much? But i like it, made me laugh. *actually read this whilst in the middle of a class at school o_o*

...What the hell? XDD
I love it.

Haha thats Funny)

er...WHAT does Itachi want to do with that toothbrush again? OMG that was SO ooc...I don't even want to think about it...

Is this your first fic? Good for an first fic.
If not, need work.
Itachi can't be blind if he saw deidara and sasori.
I like the zestu fly babies.
keep this an one shot if you plan on making another.

Hello! Glad 2 see ur back ^^ Loved this fic, which meanz much in seeing as though I usually dislike SasoDei ficz. Keep up the excellent writing, tlk soonz ^^
-Heaven