Oh my God. So sad and so lovely. The last line was just great.
=]

Guh. ::flails about slightly:: It's not fluffy, it's rather verging on angsty but it's so wonderful and magnificent! I love the images and the dialogue and the end just GOT me for some reason that I can't really figure out. The characterization was spot on for me. Brilliant really. Magnificent. Fantastic job with the whole thing.

I don't really know what to say... I haven't read very much slash before, but that was really beautiful. I loved every bit of it.

Wow. That was incredible. It was so original and new and different. I absolutely loved it. You're a terrific writer. This was brilliant.

I normally try to avoid slash fics, but this is so tasteful! I really really enjoyed it. I got so in to it I thought it was real for a second. Splendidful job, Tierfal!

I love the mood of this piece.
It really sets a sort of melancholic not-quite-sad sort of a feeling that works so well with the characters.
Well done!

Despite Sirius' grumpiness and general angst, this made me smile :) I like those two together :D

I loved it. The characterizations were great. It was so dark and sad...which actually is what I absolutely enjoy reading for some odd reason. lol Well done.

Absolutely beautiful. You're a very gifted writer. *runs off to check your other stories*

Oh, man, I love that last line. It's absolutely perfect. Rather like the rest of this fic, actually...

This made me pensive. I had to sleep on it before I found the words to review, and I'm still not entirely sure they're adequate.

Their relationship is melancholy and convenient, but still beautiful in bleak sort of way. Does that make any sense? They just seem so lost and confused, like they're looking for something but aren't sure what and don't know where to begin.

"... to prove there's someone else out there." - I think this describes their current relationship perfectly.

"flower-strewn felicity..." - I really liked this turn of phrase. Perhaps it's the alliteration.

"Scars shine on Remus’s back, like wax in relief." - You make it sound like his scars define him, which, I think, they do to an extent.

"Their insistent glowing eyes..." Creepy *shivers*

"He tosses himself down next to Remus, just close enough. He’s good at things like that." - I'm not really sure why I liked this line so much. I think it speaks to how Sirius had once been idolised, and how Remus still feels a little of that admiration, even if it's buried away.

My very favourite: "Sirius glances at the sky, which has most of Remus’s attention, which would indicate that there’s something there to look at." - Sirius affects a cynicism that borders on hostility, but he sees Remus differently, even if he doesn't know it. I think this line shows that. Despite what the world's done to them, somewhere inside they're still Moony and Padfoot.

Wow, so I just read all that over, and I hope I haven't over-thought all of this. If I did, I hope it at least makes you laugh. As ever, another wonderful piece. It amazes me how you can write something as silly and amusing as 'Her and Me' and 'Enigmaticness Abounds' and then write something as thought-provoking as this. Very well done. I can't wait for whatever's next!

Angst and slashiness and smoking!Sirius... all make me a very happily little reader! :D

Wonderful. Absolutely freaking wonderful.
...Have I mentioned how wonderful that was?

You portrayed them magnificently (I thought I ought to find a new word, and backspaced after I'd already used 'wonderful' for the fourth time this review).

Thank you, very much. My Tierfal-withdrawal pains are dying down a little now.

Keep it up. ie: more, please?

a) I love the fact that you write coherent English.
b) I love the end line of this fic.
c) I am quite intrigued by the dynamic beween the two in this fic. I like it.
d) Brits say "petrol" instead of "gasoline." I believe you mention the smell of gasoline in the alleyway sometime in this story, and I thought you might like to know that it should be "the smell of petrol" instead if you want to make it true to the Brit lexicon.
e) I am basically in love with the quotes on your profile page. Is it weird that I recognized every single one of them?
f) Good work.

Thanks! I'll be checking out some of your other stuff soon.

Very sweet, yet so sad... Nice job. :) I am so jealous that you are done with school! XP