did i miss something? I can't remember when Negi bit Chisame... other than that, I realy liked it. Love this story!

Good Chapter. So I guess you weren't kidding when you said the dolls where gonna save Negi. I figured it would be that it would be either scinerio a) they collide with a pursuer, or scinerio b) they somehow distract Lucinda. I guess it was the former ne? So how long would you say those things were airborne and did Negi take them with him? Well any keep the good work up and good luck with classes I know how much of a B. and time consumeing they can be. Also sorry for the spelling errors.

Man that scene with the figureines was halarious. Did you watch Space Balls before writting this chapter?

Great chapter, a little short. With all the introducing of new titles, characters and settings it seems like your leading up to something - anxious to see what it is. Keep up the good work :)

I have but a single question; when did Negi bite Chisame?
I do not recall that happening, I do not believe that I have missed it even after going back and re-reading FVA and BYE.
Is there a chance that in the next update you would be willing to enlighten the ignorant here?
Excellent story as always, please do keep up the wonderful work.
I look forward to your next update.

Hi there traingham I always wanted to post a review but i didn't know how to do it(i thougth only writers could do it XD)but i have followed you since FVA(from summer last year if i remmenber correctly) and I really like this history negi being a vampire is pretty cool :) but i also like the part of kotaro(specially his relationship with his sisters) and i really want to see what happened to him and his "fiance"(quite the fiance he's got) also reading the last chapter of the manga(265 magia erebea corrupted him that will also happen here? and you also mentioned when Reina recognized negi as the son of the T.M she said "one of the children of the T.M" so that means negi has brother's of sister's or was just and error? well gretings and keep up the good work :D

Like always: a great chapter.
You never fail to amuse me, my good sir.

But some things did spark a bit more of my interest:
- Reina gasped, "Unbelievable...that I find myself faced with one of the 'Thousand Master's' children."
Is it going to turn out that Negi has 1 or more siblings?
(meaning that Nagi having a pactio with some 10 girls holds some grounds)

And what's the deal with Chisame and her dark vampire side?
As far as I can remember from previous chapter, it was only mentioned once is a flashback (or flashforward, don't know exactly), so am I missing out on something here?

Anyway, I'm looking forward to be reading more of your work :)

Nice chapter but a but confusing, anyway if your book gets published could I know the name of your book so I can find it?

Only one thing: I assume the incantation used that included the word jacio is latin, but latin does not include the letter "j", and would be spelled iacio. Nitpicky, I know, but I've taken latin for a while xP

YAY! You finally updated!!

Sorry for just updating know, even if i had read FVA and BYE some long time ago... I just reviewed know, to let you know that your story rocks!! It's really impressing and it made my day, though i have a teeny tiny request, UPDATE. FASTER.

Anyways...Is there gonna be people who's gonna travel with Negi (not the Mahora Girls)? Like another puny vampire, or a puny lycan, or Kotaro?? jus askin...

Again GREaT StoRy ! Update Sooner!
Tantei1412

At last a new chapter... Thanks for your hard work..
Your writing skill is great and you should be proud for yourself, this story already had 300++ review.
Its great you know. Considering this is negima section which the reader aren't much.

Keep the good work

i have read a lot of negimas fanfics but let me tell you that your fic is the best XD, i have a few questions.

1) will negi be using that twilght magic tha apear in the first fic or that was a one time magic that he did only in the heat of his battle with eva?

2)im kind of intrigue about the relationship that negi is goin to have with xue, will chao be born? or more interesting her mother will be xue or ti would change?

3) and last one is this going to be the las fic of the fva series??

Yo there,1
Nice chapter Its such a relief that you finally updated. How long is this story actually going to be, like in chapters and words? Seriously you're really good at this kind of creative stuff.

Yipster

IT IS SO AWESOME TO HAVE YOU BACK MAN!! This chapter was awesome. Emotional developments for the girls of Mahora, cat-fights between Mistresses, and follow ups to Negi and Xue. Nice. Please continue to move forward mon.

That fic you mentioned got ditched ages ago. For a long time I wanted to do a vampire Negi but you beat me to the punch. It stuttered up my thought processes a crap load but now I finally have a decent fic in production. About thre chapters long. I`ll tell you the full plot via pm after I finish writing this review.

Okay you are back on track. These side trips you had before that seem to hang around like an embarassing uncle trying to be hip I hope remain gone. I like what you did to get him to escape. I liked the intro to Chao`s mother too. As usual nothing goes well for him.

Damn Akamatsu did beat me to that question didn`t he? I really hope you get her artefact soon. That would be so cool!

Anyway I`m liking how all this dark mistress stuff is coming around. I do however dislike the air of mystery surrounding them slightly. It`s making it hard for me to keep track of them.

Anyway my only other issue is your sometimes lack of background and well decent desriptions beyond the face of characters you introduce. Your pacing can sometimes be jumpy or slow too.

Anyway past all that time for question time best currently running fic in the Negima section (I intend to challenge you for that some day)

Q.Eva? Why is she letting anyone bother her at all? I`m surprised she isn`t ranting or siccing Chacha on her

Q.What`s the deal with all the shock regarding Chacha`s changes? Eva in canon noted she might be growing a soul. Hell even indreictly she told Negi that passed it on to Chacha when they were making said pactio? Just curious if you knew or just playing it up for the sake of the fic?

Q.Any chance you could extend the fight scenes a bit more. The guards were kinda lame. You used to do great battle scenes but lately its been dry in that department.

Q.Lastly Will we see any lemons in this? I`m kinda curious since all these vampiresess are rather highly sexed or I`ve been led to believe anyway. Pardon my perverted mind but I enjoy reading such things