WOW. YOU WROTE IT SO BEAUTIFULLY! I really love your writing, and yeah, it was cool for you to leave things to our imaginations :D

Hm...? Somehow I always imagined Sakura's daughter would be named Saki... But stilll, awesome story!

I love it. Well composed and made.

Love it!

Can i suggest trying out a dark MadaSaku? Your a awesome Writer and MadaSaku is awesome so I was wondering if you could try that out. If you can thank you and if not i understand.. It is a bit difficult.

yep,they will have a daughty,and a they'll be pinky and raven sweet.

The plot is amazing.

I LOVE IT

kind of sad ne?

WAAAAAAAH! I so love the way you made the story! :)

even though somebody died TT aw. but it was very good and it has all the mutual love parts so I think I'm fine with it all. :) great job!

awwwwww

Sasuke had a kid with Sakura. faillll madara. This is so adorable. I hope you write a back story to this. it would be really nice.

prequel please? situation where sasuke interacts with his daughter?

Hi, I know that this is a late review but I totally think you should make a sequal out of this or a Multi-Chap. I wanna see Sasuke in it! :)

AW! And maybe somehow Sakura can come back to lfe...?

Yeah like a plot -IDEA- that maybe goes a little something like this...

They have to work together Father-Daughter teamwork

And Sasuke doesnt know she knows he's the father

And they go on a journey/mission to get a scroll that can bring Sakura back...

aw -wait!- or maybe... maybe... Sakura isnt really dead!

aww!teehee!

This was good! I liked the little twists in this one-shot.

truly a great story. i always did wonder if madara or orochimaru made a fatal mistake by teaching sasuke all those techniques.

amazing story! D

wow, you're a great writer. i love how you capture the moments!