This time around is pretty damn different! Different is good, you've been kind of angsty lately, haven't you? I really enjoy, it makes a good story. I can feel Tenten's pain.

Sorry, for reviewing all this days, but you deserved it.

KibaIno?! Quite a surprise, hadn't read the before but I think you did an excellent job in compelling emotions altogether. And Kiba's kiss was just dunno how to describe it but thanks, continue the great work.

It was pretty damn cute, Tenten's phrase gunned me: "“Cold weather is the enemy of women," nice touch. And the kiss was <3.

Tenten's mom was just awesome, it was quite long which I enjoy. I guess I still haven't mentioned that I love your AUs. Tenten is the awesome I lub her. <3

Crack, crack, crack, seriously, it killed me. Lmao, naked Neji! I wish I had seen that

Hm...quite interesting since there's no nejiten, had never really thought about naruten before but it's actually cute. You did a good job on the emotional lvl. Not my favorite tho, good job nonetheless.

They way you did the contrast between them was just good. Pretty good actually, that's my fav. word, don't you think?
What else can be said, keep them coming.

I melted into a puddle of goo. Seriously, this was so well executed...I just gah. You did a great job in describing an ordinary relationship, I really really liked.

There was a warm feeling about this all that I couldn't help myself but to smile.

"I thought you were a genius," line was a great punchline. My likey.

That was too cute the rose part was a nice touch, will be reading you.

not exactly my favorite, but it had lots of good highlights. It's rather gloom, I'm not into that...much, BUT still I liked it alot!
You've improved lately, I can see as I continue reading! sorry for never reviewing!

Also: GOOD LUCK! GOOD LUCK!

:)
Continue please!

Goodness, that was a very good chapter. It seemed so realistic, as though it could happen to anyone at any moment in time.
Poor Tenten, unrequited affection does not is a very wonderful feeling.
I hope that you will have a great day and enjoy playing Sims 3!

aw thanks for the dedication! So angsty! Wah, you make me so sad for Tenten :'( But tha'ts good cos that's what you were aiming for right? You definitely nailed the Tenten's emotions I think ^^

It was definitely different to your usual style but it's good to see you experimenting and pushing yourself ^^ Keep it up =D

p.s. omg I still haven't beta-ed your other stuff you sent me last time I feel so bad. Once I am organised I will do so because I am holidays (just came back from Japan =D) so I don't really have uni to distract me anymore!

hey! Aww you dedicated the fic to me!! :D I'm so proud...
Well I really like it, mm I think Tenten thinks life is a **, but what can we do about it? How could Neji not notice what she wanted to say by " stay", come on! Neji is also a **, ... but a sexy one... Again thank you for the dedication and good luck with your other projects I will be waiting for them :D

Wow thank you for the dedication, i feel quite honoured (:
I really liked how you weaved in the lyrics of the song and how they worked very well together with your use of imagery and poetic language in your writing, it really helped portray the emotion of pain and possible unrequited love(?) of Tenten.
It is different from your previous works, but i enjoyed it, and it's always nice to read something different and unexpected. Haha, what is not a better distraction then Sims3, i've yet to play it, but i'm currently addicted to inFamous (my new excuse for my lateness).
Ah, i look forward to reading your new fic or two, and good luck for your big project. Keep up the great work, and i'll be waiting for more (:
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