I always wondered how Star became a vampire...
This story has a really great start, you really caught Stars character too.
I can't wait to read more!

I like how you've captured the characters. I could totally see them speaking and interacting with one another just as they did in the movie. I'm interested in seeing more..

Please continue :D

Selena Angel.

not bad--definitely has potential

When I watched the movie, I have wondered about how Star became a vampire. I think by what I am reading now that you have captured it well. An innocent girl attracted to a vampire. Very nice. Two thumbs up.

Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

I like it and hope that you update real soon. lol