Reviews for Past Grievances

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Skolli 2008-06-18 ch 11,	abuseOh, great. I come back from my vacation and what do my tired eyes see? You completed your story.(Not that I expected anything else.lol) I really liked the story in a whole. From Nanao's dreams/premonitions to the end in the 52nd district. I just thought that the end was a bit aprupt. Everything was a bit fast and then everything was alright again. But that's just my opinion. I love you just for the fact that you actually made a sequel ;-) Because I really like to see what happens after they get together. Their life, really. Are you thinking about doing some one-shots about them, or some more stories? What's the sequel to a sequel called? Well, great work!
KyourakuZelda 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseAw that was so cute! I loved your last story and I'm just beginning to enjoy this one! Please do keep on!
JenovaJuice97 2008-06-10 ch 11,	abusei enjoyed reading this story and i really liked it :)
JenovaJuice97 2008-06-10 ch 10,	abuseno...gr...he cant have escaped grr..
M.infinity 2008-06-09 ch 11,	abuseAww what a cute ending. A bit sad that the story is over, but I think you brought it to a nice close. You did a good job of closing the loose ends, though I did feel a bit bad for Yukio toward the end. I liked "The Three Hardest Phrases" more, but probably only because this story seemed more of a closing of the first one. And the idea was a bit predictable after reading the first. Still an excellent read though. It's been fun reading and waiting for the new chapters to be posted. Can't wait for your next story! (:
Meesch 2008-06-09 ch 11,	abuseI like your cheesy poem xD - by using it throughout both stories, you made it kind of symbolic, adn really important to them. yay, a happy ending ~ Great job!
JenovaJuice97 2008-06-09 ch 9,	abuseTHANK YOU for the ending..i was thinking omg this is gonna turn into an annoying cliche just like Yukio said but im soo glad it was only part of the story..thank you thank you
Aletta-Artemis-Vervada 2008-06-09 ch 11,	abuseGood ending. THANK GOODNESS!! Yukio finally got what he deserved. The poem isn't cheesy, it's cute. And yes, I say cute alot, but artemis usually does more. (Art: So...?) :P
JenovaJuice97 2008-06-09 ch 8,	abuseive always wanted to see Nanao as a captian but i thought it would be to one of the captain-less divisons after the beytral
JenovaJuice97 2008-06-09 ch 7,	abusethis is getting juicy...that guy..the one doing this i can never remember his name..Yukio nvr mind..anyways hes getting annoying..i think if they kissed in the last chapter it would have been fine and added to the story..and now Nanao is missing im liking this
JenovaJuice97 2008-06-09 ch 6,	abuseNanao should have just told Rangiku what she saw
Kitsune Moonstar 2008-06-09 ch 11,	abuseLovely end. You did a good job with this. I liked the references back to The Three Hardest Phrases. Kit~_^
M.infinity 2008-06-07 ch 10,	abuseAww. I actually thought you were going to end it. :P I am glad there's more though, this story is nice to read. I'm glad they figured and worked everything out, though the ending statement was probably a bummer for them. Can't wait until the next chapter! (:
darkangel1910 2008-06-07 ch 10,	abuseLet Nanao got Bankai on him please.
Meesch 2008-06-07 ch 10,	abuseYay, that was awesome. I really liked how they made up at the end - just the right amount fo fluff! As for Yukio escaping, I guess it was bound to happen. How do you stop somebody when they can just make you give them the keys? Great job, as always!

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