 Phoenix Flight 2009-10-04 . chapter 4 Bwa-ha-ha! Alice must be so awesome to write! |
 Sony Boy 2009-09-14 . chapter 4Short. Sweet. Totally works for me. As I semi-dislike the whole series-loved the characters, hated the plot(and Bella a bit), this just gave me a positive view on the characters.
I'd really love to see how this would all work out from now on with this begining. Oh damn the bunnies. |
 luvpuppies7133 2009-07-02 . chapter 4i loved that it was really funny!
i wish it didnt end so soon |
 luvpuppies7133 2009-07-02 . chapter 2This is a really good story i have always loved Alice and i find it funny how she is going 2 go over there randomaly with only knowing bella for 1 day. that is something i could see alice doing in the book along with planing everything already |
 tsukiko94 2009-06-12 . chapter 4Oh wow, this was hilarious, i was literally laughing hysterically. If i wasn't in the desk chair, i probably would have been rolling on the floor laughing. I LOVED it! It was a brilliant idea,and you executed it beautifully. Best quote i've ever read describing Alice "Your'e acting like a pixie on crack."
Good job *claps hands* here's a round of applause. |
 Fleur24 2009-05-27 . chapter 4Abosutely loved it. I loved Her and Emmett's bet. |
 sdsdancer67 2009-05-16 . chapter 4I love it! This story was so cute, simple, and short! |
 WriterMerrin 2009-04-22 . chapter 4Sweet ending. I like how you utilized almost all of the Cullens, showing Alice more in-depth. Having Edward laugh in the cafeteria was awesome, as was the times Alice thinks of Jasper as her husband. Great line about Edward enjoying his role as angst-ridden artist. Cute little AU. |
 WriterMerrin 2009-04-22 . chapter 1Oh very neat. I like the way you combine cute touches of happy thoughts and predictions with some darker images. Very good. |
 Prismaa 2009-04-09 . chapter 4Aw, this was nice to read! Thank you. |
 randa111 2009-04-07 . chapter 4Loved it. Great story line. Very entertaining as well. |
 whispering in the dark 2009-03-15 . chapter 4hha, I loved the story. I think you really captured how Alice thinks and acts!
Also, what was the last vision? I'm really curious! lol =) |
 WannabeMrsCullen 2009-03-15 . chapter 4defo favourited:) |
 Anna562 2009-02-25 . chapter 1"..not eating Bella would be a challenge..eating Bella would be a disaster". I really was laughing aloud. I love your "what if" story! Alice is one of my favorites, and you captured her perfectly. Thanks for writing. |
 Lozzarah 2009-02-17 . chapter 4LOL! That ending was brilliant!
"pixie on crack" love it!
-Lauren. |