Hehe, I like Sirius's train of thought. :) And how Remus seems so apprehensive about them being together. Nice job.

About the "feel anything about it"-thing - I think I like your story. Kind of. I like the happy ending, and the whole story is beautifully written. I would have been a bit depressed (I am VERY easily affected by fics I read) if it would have ended with Sirius, sitting alone on his bed, thinking depressing things about Remus. But no, you gave me a nice ending with them pairing up :) Way to go! :)

As I said, I think you write in a beautiful way that I like. Your writing style (in this fic) is a bit dreamy, and it feels like Sirius' thoughts, just every slightly random thing that comes to his mind.

I liked this fic, and now I'm off to check out your other ones ;)

Very sweet. A lovely idea. Do you really want some concrit? If so, my one suggestion might be that to make it easier to decipher thoughts from verbal conversation (eg - once Remus enters the room), add the little '..' thingys (the name of which escapes me at one in the morning) around the speech. Or put thought or dialouge in italics. Just to make it easier for lazy type people like me who read in the very early hours of the morning with only half a functioning brain. Take it or leave it but there it is. :-)
Like I said though, it was very cute. Sirius was in character and Moony was trying to be very sensible as always. I'd like to see this from Remus POV as well (Yes, that was a MASSIVE hint for you to write said fic. I'm not a subtle person, as you can probably tell) :-)

okay i liked this i really did but seriously i wanna know y remus won't give it a chance , sirus was awesomethough i think u got him just right :)