Haha! You know sometimes I wonder if Tony is an actual adult or a man-child. I think he's both:) Nice story

Great job!:))

Hilarious and perfectly in-character.
Though, personally, I'd think the dreams of Gorge Clooney are all well and good, and while Potts is justified not wanting her boss around just then, she would secretly want him there (in the dream and around) after all.

This could really happen.
Well done.

lol That was great! ;D

Ha Ha I just watched Iron Man and this is so them. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

Hehe, that was interesting. Very, very interesting. And unique. =)

I like it!

~nabbi

Best line: "Pepper drifts to a stop next to the wide back doors of the retrieval truck. Tony is driving the cart and it is a mental image she is going to keep sacred because there is never going to be anything funnier than her boss wandering around in a ripped up flight suit pushing a Target cart."

Agreed, Miss Potts. I know it's dangerous to throw around the word "genius," but I have to use it here. You had me laughing so much, and so hard... This was hilarious. It reads with such authenticity and good humor. Tony is perfect. And while Pepper might be a little feistier than Gwyneth Paltrow's portrayal in the movie (which I can easily blame on the sleep deprivation), she's still the centerpiece of this piece and a hell of a lot of fun to read. Fantastic work.

I was laughing outloud at the part with the Iron Man action figures. I was totally picturing it in my head. This story was just so funny.

HA! Love it!

Oh-ho-ho!~ You have no idea how much I enjoyed this fic. The best thing about it? You captured the extreme fluffiness yet childish and unstable leaning ways of Tony and Pepper's relationship.

At first, reading the summary, I thought this was going to be /overly/ ridiculous and cliche, but this fic is just too. Cute. Really.

I hope to see more Tony/Pepper works from you again!

Haha, best line:

"Are you sure we don't own Target? CAN we own Target? This is the best."

I love Tony. :D

Hilarious, I really enjoyed this. What a little kid.

I had to re-read this twice to make sure I wasn't seeing things!xD
Completely in character and clever descriptions of Tony's moods/personality made this very enjoyable!

Excelent work!

~Catherine

After reading the summary, I didn't think I would like this story. No offense to you, it's just that most of the stories I read about "so and so going to a such and such store" are very bad. I mean REALLY bad.
But you made this work, and I ended up enjoying the story, so good job! You actually created a plausible explanation for why they were at a Target in the first place, too, which is great.
And, somehow, I can see Tony running amok in a store. Good work!

LOL! he. Tony pushing the cart and whining. Priceless...