That was perfect. Absolutely gorgeous. :)
The dialogue was so...Alexander. And it could've been totally cheesy but it worked so well in this.
Brilliantly done and totally cute.
Hephaestion's uncontrollable laughter was pretty much the epitome of adorable. Hehe.

A beautiful story. Simple, full of emotion and a bit of classic teenage confusion. Though, I kind of doubt they would have realized this at the age of 19 lol! But at least their minds are relatively mature by this age.

Beautiful story. It was very well done. I'm certainly not complaining, but as far as we know the Greek men only made love 'between the thighs' but since this is really based on a movie, and since I adore anything with Jared Leto's body ravishing Colin's then I'll let it go.

Pretty sweet. I like that Olympias knows. Big Sister Is Watching You? Nice story. :)

Very well written, enjoyable and believable (although I doubt they would have waited until they were 19). I liked the idea of Alexander giving himself first and foremost to Hephaestion – it was a lovely gesture, typical of Alexander, and well conveyed. Hope to see more from you.