oh, that's a great ending...
I love that you put Charlie is buried with the Wonka chocolate bar, XD...

Very short, but very well written. Deep and sad. I'm just... speechless. Well done.
Thanks for this moment.

A great story. Very good.

that was so sad...it was a very clever idea wonderfully written

Beautiful. I actually got misty reading this, which is rare for me on fics. I didn't really read the Author's Notes, so I wasn't expecting this ending. The words you use are perfect, everything is perfect. I love how it was all a dream Charlie had as he was dying, and how Wonka never really existed and it all never happened and... beautiful.

This is truley a fantastic and short fic. Wonderfully written and very deep. One of my all time favorites. Favorited.

Wow, now im seriously thinking on sharing my work. Everytime I read somthin of yours, I feel like posting my stories, but im scared my thoughts my be too stupid, or really depressing ( I know what ya probably thinkin,its "fanfiction")But I still worry and I have loads, that are actually dreams Ive had. Anyway, I digress, I always love ur work though. :-)

-Miz nu booty aka kenoi

OmG...That was so sad...I like the last sentence the best! I always like the last ones..he he...

Very sad, but also very well written. I can't think of much else to say, but that did give me a lump in my throat.

Sometimes the things that beg to be written just have to be, no matter how hard it is to do so. You showed that with this story. Well done.