Brilliant! Very ingenius, creative and inspiring! Keep up your awesome writing!

Ah, wondrously dark! ^_^

If a beta is still needed, then I would be thrilled to help. :)

Either way, I love your style of writing.

I liked this story - although perhaps "liked" is too sweet a word for a story as creepy as this..

If you still need a beta, I'd be more than happy to apply!

As always you make the story fit in just such a way as to make it near impossible for the reader to fully understand the story, until the last sentence. You make everything fall in place perfectly with the last word. Magnificent as always IDOL HANDS. Thank you for another marvelous read.

Oh, trust me, I'm not only good with grammar and don't mind the tone of your writing, but I *love* the way you write, and the subjects you write on. =] Though, what a beta is, I'm unsure. O__O;;

OMG! That was soo **' AWESOME! KyA! Write more fics like this one! Or better! A sequel! He he! I luuv this fic! AS I said...brilliant!..

A very nice start to another story.

I would like to see more in this vein.

I would like to act as a Beta reader for you and i don't mind this tone at all.