That was by far the best one,
I didn't find any awkward scene changes and I could identify the speaker fluently, and I didn't notice any major grammatical errors (I don't usually look for them but big ones are noticable).
Also, great use of the PoV tool, which I don't see it to often around here, and it is the best way to build charactization.
Really good for a Series finale fic!(When I first read chapter one, I was listening to "Imagine" by John Lennon(the Beatles) and it creeply fit, then for chapter 2, my playlist switched to "A little help from my friends(The Beatles) which fit WAY too well... try it and see what I mean... my pc is haunted, or messing with me... again)