Oh Elizabeth this was good, yet sad. Oh you got to get Todd out of his funk. I hate to see him so miserable with the likes of that faithless tramp Blair. I'm hoping Star will hint to Todd that Evangeline's is pregnant and he goes on the charge to claim his love back. My heart broke at his last words to Vicki and I want my Tangie back and happy with their twins. I know with Star's visit to Evangeline is going to get the ball rolling and I for to the good too. Thanks for updating dear!! *HUGS*

I hope you do continue it! This OLTL board needs more great stories.

The Blair part was wild. That part was my favorite. I hope you write more soon so we can see some Tangline scenes.

Dude, I LOVE THIS!

I love how much Van misses him, and she's having his BEBES!! AH!

And I love how much Starr adores her in this.

Blair who? Bwahahahahah.

This is really good story and Todd and Eva's love is so sweet. IMO, if Todd hasn't slept with Blair then the marriage wasn't consummated. I don't like that she slept with him knowing he's married, but Blair has been cheating on Todd for how long? She's now sleeping with someone else while married, that in and of itself ended that marriage along with her deceit. But Todd needs to do the right thing and end the marriage legally so he can be a father to his children with Eva and have the woman he truly loves.

I'm loving your version of Starr and Vikki and I'm glad that you didn't have Eva forgive her sister, Chris or even Blair like they would've had her do on the show. UGH! Human nature doesn't work like that. It takes time to reflect to be able to forgive someone for something so treacherous. In the end Eva will probably forgive all of them once she's with the man she loves raising their children.

I hope you continue your story and bring it all to a VERY HAPPY EVER AFTER!

J.MOORE

Yay!! This story is finally updated. I knew it, I knew Evangeline was going to be pregnant and with twins too. Aww, I want Todd and Evangeline to get back together and I hope the ** Blait get hers before it is over with. She doesn't even love Todd, yet she can't stand for him to be happy. Ugh. Oh I so love Star in this story. She such the young woman I hope she would grow up too. Too bad she isn't this way on the show. Ugh. Of course I want this story to be continue and be finish. I don't mind mind how long it takes to be finish as long as it become finish! Please do not give-up this story. I don't want another great story I loved fall in to the waste-side. Please Continue!! I need Tangie to be happy with their twins!!

This is so sad but I think Vicki and Starr cry way too much. I enjoyed this story but I'm not sure Vange would sleep with Todd not while he's married to BlairHo.

I thought it was quite good.I think Starrs matured a bit sinc the first chapter.

Thoughts? Her butt better be coming back! It was so turmoil filled.

First of all Elizabeth, I'm sorry for your troubles. I hope you are feeling better and things work out well for you. Of course you don't have to ask for forgiveness when updating was out of your hands. *hugs* Back to the story. I love it, but you better not let Evangeline run away like she did. How can she make sweet love to Todd then run. Impossible if you ask me, but I understand why she did. Poor Todd and Evangeline. The trick is a sorry excuse for a woman and I can't wait to see she get hers in the end. Layla needs to suck it up. She cause all this mess and I just pray that Todd don't come down on her hard too after he seek his revenge on everybody that is trying to keep Todd away from Evangeline. Those low-lives have just won one battle. They haven't won the war at all, not with Todd Manning is in the plot and revenge mood. Oohh, I scared for those fools lives. LOL Great update update by the way. I can't wait to see the update soon!!

I love this story. I think your characterizations are really well done.

I'll be looking forward to more soon:D

Why did you stop at a kiss/ Girl you have perverts who read this stuff!

How racy can you get on this site? LOL. Keep going girl

I love this so much. I'm so glad that Todd told Layla off. She deserve it. I have the trick of a woman Blair. She really think that Todd is going to love her again. That's a laugh. I so loving Vicki and Star in this story. It's nice to see strong women in stories like this one. Oh!! I love Todd and Evangeline scene in the end. They are so good together and that kiss was so sweet. Okay hurry up with the next update.

I love it please continue. I'm in Tangie withdral from the show. So your story is a live saver.

Argh, my last review didn't have everything I said, but basic that Blair is a evil thing and Todd will find a way to get away from the trick. I wish Evangeline would fight a little more. She's an attorney. She should know rights that Todd have after Blair lied to Todd. Yet Evangeline is so noble that she may not fight this at first. I hope to see that fire back in Evangeline real soon. Star is so wonderful in this story. Why can't she be this cool on T.V. I hope she does open Jack's eyes about their mother, but he is such a mama's boy. Yes, Stat found a way for Todd to see Evangeline before Todd snaps on that trick. Cool! Love the upday and I hope to see an update soon!