*sniff*
I cried so many times during this story.
I really loved it. <3

Aww love the story!

While normally I would enjoy a story like this i can't seem to get over how OOC Harry and Draco are. The story I must unfortunatly say is just too far from cannon with harry being soo soo... Mean! I don't like people like that and I can't stand harry being like that. I would have liked to see what Draco made of harry without the potion and had some of their rivalry to deal with before anything more can happen.
Thanks for writing anyway.
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Huh. Moral of the story is, that if you lie cheat and break the laws you CAN get what you've always wanted! Good story, and very very well written. Love the way the elves speak, especially Harry.
The only thing that rubbed me the wrong way was how cold and how completely far from cannon Harry was. You could just as well have named him Snape in the story. Seems that it would have worked even better if you'd reversed the roles and made Draco the ice prince and Harry the poor besotted little boy lured in the trap.
Despite that the story was well worth it!

Cheers!

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

so far so good

Hmm... This isn't really a Harry Potter story at all, is it? Sure it has Draco, but the entire thing is completely dissimilar from the series. The amount of OCs you managed to cram into this almost makes me sick. The deities seemed to be thrown in for grins, other than Mele... the goddess of love. You modeled your style after Tolkien, or at least it seemed that way to me, but it wasn't constant. Formality is good, yes, but pick one level of it and don't let yourself get above or below it. And for heaven's sake, couldn't you have made it a Harry Potter fanfic if you're going to put it in this section? Maybe Draco went back to his own world and Hari/Harry followed him and there was some huge adventure at Hogwarts or something, I don't know.

But I liked reading this. It had lots of flaws but the plot was super. I think, if you revised it so that it was completely original (change Draco's name, maybe tweak the back-story a tiny bit) and put some consistency in the style, you might be able to get it published.
Keep up the good work!
-Expi-

I like so far, people usually do it the other way around, with Drco being all mystic and magical and Harry young and innocent, great job so far

Aww, this chapter was so sad and sweet. I loved the ending!
I figured the Half-Drow with the Rintula would be Noalith. Now I understand how they met.
There really was a lot of crying in this chapter.
I wonder what happened to the Drow that was scheming with the mountain Elf Hari first fell in love with.

Thanks for the story!

update soon

wait, there are still alot of things that haven't been revealed yet. Like draco knowing that Hari and Harry Potter are the same person, as well as what happens with draco's family; will he never see them again? Or will Hari ever tell Draco about the potion? I loved the fic, just some things I was hoping would be addressed before it finished.

Oh my God! I've been reading this faithfully, but this is my first time commenting. This chapter, and the rest of the story too, are absolutely amazing.

I'm so happy for Hari and Draco! YAY!

About time Hari got that stick out his arse! And how may I ask did Draco make a fool of himself. It was Hari and that damned love potion. That's right Hari don't you pass the blame! Shame on you. *insert glare here*

Well now that is all cleared up, I can't help but to be worried about Narcissa...I'm sure she would rather be with Draco than Lucius.