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| StefForPresident 2008-08-09 ch 2, | abusethis is such an awesome story, please update! you captured bender perfectly, rough yet gentle, nervous yet longing for claire... i love it! g'luck nd please update soon... -s |
| helinahandcart 2008-07-27 ch 2, | abuseAwesome can't wait for the next chapter |
| Cinnamon Flavored Words 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseYou should keep this going. It's got my interest. So, get typing . . . xoxo |
| helinahandcart 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseOh please keep this up, I want to find out more about the others and where Brian and Claire end up and will there be a reunion? so get your muse typing now - mmwhah |
| See Them Llamas Run 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm really glad not to see the word "Complete" up on the description. The way you ended this could be an interesting story on its own, but I'm infinately glad you're continuing it. What I like best about this is that I can imagine it actually happening. You have a nice grip on reality, which is pretty refreshing when it comes to fanfiction. My only criticism is the dialogue. It felt a little awkward and unnatural, like some of it should have been narrated instead of spoken, and it came off a tiny bit out of character. I really like where you're going with this. Can't wait to see the next chapter up. |