 hollyburrows101 2008-05-29 . chapter 1that was adrorable!! |
 elfwarden 2008-05-29 . chapter 1ah another chapter please, i'm dying here.
Great story though, i liked the arguement, really r/hr
keep going
Elfwarden |
 My Splatter Painted Life 2008-05-29 . chapter 1good story. but what year did this take place in? like how old were they? |
 silverbirch 2008-05-29 . chapter 1A nice piece of work.
I love the way they let their mouths run away with them |
 storyranger 2008-05-29 . chapter 1Wow... I like!
There's a few spelling, and punctuation issues, but the plot and dialogue is really good! |