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| BravoKate 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat missing scene. Short, but very poignant, and a great look at all three characters' reactions. |
| LisaReed 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abusesniff sniff well done bravo thank u for writing this story nicly done. i think u should anothet chap for the funeral -wake but keeping it about the emotion and not the split. i love gibbs needing tonys emotion a good touch! |
| KillerQueen727 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseYay! I have been waiting to see if anyone would write a fan fiction of this conversation- I have been imagining this conversation myself since Judgment Day. Good job! - KillerQueen727 |
| Shannon Gibbs 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was so heartwrenching - I absolutely loved it. |
| M E Wofford 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was a good take on what happened during the phone call. Very good. |
| aserene 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI can only imagine how that phone call went, this was beautifully done, excellent work! |
| TroubleTrouble 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseoh my, I've got goosebumbs, beautiful story, it would have fitted perfect in the finale. Good job! |