oh god... update now.

updateupdateupdate!

Wow. Even though there was little action here, this is probably my favourite chapter so far. So many intriguing, thought-provoking things...

...Finally we know how Rhys knows about Gwen and Owen...

...“Something is coming?”
Jack nodded.
“Something is coming,” he said. “It’s best to be prepared.”

This sentence gave me the same kind of shivers I got when the Doctor mentioned 'a storms coming' in Fear Her. It's really rather powerful and well done...

...And that bit about no one should be able to bring someone back to life for good is both very true and reminded me of how Rose/Bad Wolf brought Jack back to life forever -- and how there is always consequences.

Yeah, I know this review was a bit longer than usual, but I had to let you know how much I'm loving it.
So best update soon. -grins-

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Aw, Jack and Ianto were very sweet here.
And your imagery was brilliantly done.
Thing is... how are you gonna explain the reapers, and Rhys's situation, when you said you've only got a couple chapters...?
Ah, anyway.
Well done. Update soon.
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Another brilliant chapter!
Owen wasn't a self-centered, ugly, little ** though... well, he wasn't ugly anyway. -grins-
Yeah, can't wait for more.
Wondering what exactly is on Rhys's mind...
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Nice chapter.
Wonder what Owen's gonna do.
Continue soon.

Ooh. Spooky.
Great stuff.
Continue soon.
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Oh very good update again soon.

Brilliant chapter!

One small thing though... in 'Dead Man Walking' when they do the autopsy on Owen Martha says he's 27... but you put he was 30...

Other than that, brilliant.

Update soon.

Very good more soon please.

Another brilliant chapter.

Just one small thing.

When you say,
'Owen had reached out his hand to get the phone, but then he suddenly stopped.'
I think you mean Rhys there, right? Not Owen?

Okay, other than that, great chapter.
This thing deserves much more reviews.

Great, please update soon.

Ooh, cool. Nice to see some interaction between those two, even if it did involve screaming and a shot in the chest hehe -grins- And nice to finally see an update too ;) Do so again soon.
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! u better update real fast or i will eat your plotbunnies!

OMG what a cliff hanger!