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Reviews For: Rush Moon

soylentOrange 2008-08-10 ch 8,	abuseHi JustNibblin, I didnt realise you were posting this here. It had been awhile since I read this part, and it was every bit as fantastic as I remembered.
redwalgrl-RG 2008-07-31 ch 1,	abuseFirst of all, I must say I was blown away by this chapter. The intro is incredible, and sounds very much like the 'ratings' on the DVDs. Then you move right into the story and taking it from Farnsworth's perspective is great; we have no idea what's going on either. I can't wait to continue reading this fanfic. It's been an amazing first chapter.
Moberemk 2008-07-15 ch 7,	abuseThis is some terrific writing that you have here. That's not an exaggeration-this really is some great stuff that you've got posted. The story is interesting and well-developed both in the present and in the past, and the way that they intertwine is used to great effect. While there are some stories that don't use this technique well, in this story it really helps highlight the poignancy of Fry's problem. Especially the bit with Bender in Chapter 6-that right there was frankly depressing to read. On a lighter note, the humor that shows up in the story is well-placed and fairly funny; things like "All My Circuits" are well-used as both humor and a reminder of how much time he's lost, and the bit with the Arcturian slafhok was hilarious. The characters are all actually in-character, which is honestly something of a blessing. Some writers just don't seem to get the voices quite down pat, and it can be a bit jarring to read. Now, these past two paragraphs have been essentially praise. In all honesty, it's hard to find things to actually criticize. The writing is spot-on, the story is moving at a good pace, and the spelling and grammar are good enough to the point that I didn't spot any errors. The story can't really be criticized because you're only in the opening stages of the story, and I've got a hunch that things are going to get a whole lot more complicated before this party's over. I know that the little textbox down below mentions commenting on "an aspect of the story that can be improved", but as yet, I'd say that you're on track for one of the best Futurama fanfics that I've read, if not the best of all categories. Now then, time for the standard-issue "UPDATE PLZ!"
Maxwellfan61 2008-06-01 ch 3,	abuseI've said it a million times before and I'll say it a million times more, I love this story. Glad you're posting it here, hopefully more people will get to see it.
Swann Hunter 2008-06-01 ch 3,	abuseThis is really strange so far, though I like the mystery of it. Please update soon so I won't have to wonder what happens!
Dead Composer 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abusePositively brilliant! I'll be reading this one with interest.

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