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| taylor-996 2008-07-23 ch 4,  | abuseYour story is soo sad but cute ^.^ I can't wait to read more. |
| eTerNaLzAnzI98 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuseoops! last time was already chapter 3, thought it was still chapter 2 .. well, i guess it was written chapter 2 so i thought it was chapter 2...heehee!! this chapter went by too fast for my liking .. hating the potter parents by the minute, as well as the 'light' people.. update quickly! |
| eTerNaLzAnzI98 2008-07-09 ch 3, | abusei wrote a much longer rant than this, but i can't be bothered .. but sev should have asked gabi what happened because that's his responsibility -it's the responsibility of any adult- ron, who was the cause of gabi's bump should have been reprimanded, otherwise how would they now how to act right? (i meant children).. on a much lighter note .. yay! when i first read of the new characters well, alair mostly and draco and blaise i began thinking up of any possible pairs for them .. for alair -if you hadn't already made a pair with him- i would have suggested ron (but seeing his attitude, i think not!), then i thought the twins!! you know, that would have been a great threesome!! heehee!! then i thought PERCY .. after that, i just thought, well any weasley will do (except ginny) .. for draco, will you pair him with dear sweet harry? pretty please? .. i mean they may not be the main characters, but they are one of my fave pairings! .. for blaise, how 'bout neville!! woohoo!! they will be so cute together .. well, if not, then that will be a disappointment .. you already have chapters 3 and 4 .. T_T please god, make the pairings this.. |
| eTerNaLzAnzI98 2008-07-09 ch 2, | abusewhen gabi was stumbling over his words, you could have typed it like: "pwopa sytha-.. sytha-... snake." the dash indicates that the word is cut off .. well, it gives the impression that it does ... anyway, good job on this chapter!! |
| eTerNaLzAnzI98 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseyay! i was looking for any incubus fics, and this is what i found! it;s really good so far .. keep it up! |
| Son Carmelya 2008-06-23 ch 4, | abuseplease update! |
| risi 2008-06-01 ch 2, | abuseHow sad that Gabriel's parents can't be bothered to notice him or care about him. At least Harry cares about him and I hope that doesn't change. Thank goodness Severus is there to care for Gabriel. |
| risi 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting start though I have never heard of Outsiders or Ponyboy. Will this influence your story a lot? As for note #3, well I'm not sure about other women but most of the ones I know, myself included, don't want a lot of people crowded around while you're grunting and groaning legs spread wide trying to give birth. |
| crazychicalol 2008-06-01 ch 2, | abuseaww so bitter sweet please update soon |