 Sabishii Kage Tenshi 2008-10-05 . chapter 1-Laughs- Nice! |
 Lai Jun Chen 2008-07-01 . chapter 1that was funny and cute. so, at the end, do you mean odds of who would marry rukia? |
 Plain Jane Is A Vampire 2008-06-10 . chapter 1a haha there is more, right it's good please update soon. |
 Artificial Life Creator 2008-06-01 . chapter 1that was wonderful! crazy and silly and *running away screaming* |
 Xx.Fate.Eater.xX 2008-05-30 . chapter 1xDD *Giggles non-stop* Ahahaha. Ichi, *stiffles laughter* Got- ahaha- engaged to-pft ahaha-Rukia. *slaps her face hard*
Ahem... That was... xD *Slaps herself again* ow... I enjoyed reading. It was a very... pft *pinches her hand hard* Ouch, I loved reading this. *Whimpers and rubs her cheek where she slapped herself* Byakuya was wearing a dress! *Starts laughing* Oh and teh wind was talking. That was very amusing. XD Anywyas, I'm alerting in case u wanna add to this wonderful one(two)-shot. x_X
xP |
 Chaos Dragon 2008-05-29 . chapter 1oh, this was hilarious. i'm story alerting it just in case you add to it, but it's heading straight into my c-2. loved it!
~cd |
 Khyara 2008-05-29 . chapter 1That was definitely interesting and with a whole new point of view that made your story a breath of fresh air. Kudos on the plot, it was quite funny and as I stated before a total new approach.
nice work! |
 AAA ASRA AAA 2008-05-29 . chapter 1L. O. L. Funny!
but I think you could've made ichigo a bit more, mature I suppose I mean it was funny but I think Ichigo could've handled himself better |