|Reviews for Snowed In|
| Jazz 8/17/09 . chapter 5
Aww yay! Pai and Retasu had children P
I loved the chapter Oneechan!
| theforgottencreatures 8/17/09 . chapter 5
Aww that was really cute I luv it! :)
| Tazzybizzy 8/17/09 . chapter 5
Safi-chan, you did it! You finished this story with an excellent ending! This fic was adorable from beginning to end! I really liked all the names, especially the twins.
It was cute that even after all those years, Taruto is still a bit childish and that Pai was actually unprepared. XD
All the children sound so cute and you gave such great descriptions of them! The love triangle is soo cute and humorous! The twins seem like they will give Kisshu and Ichigo a run for their money XD.
The anniversary surprise is cute. Just cute. And a little spicy. XP
I wonder what happened to Ryou...
Are you happy that you finally finished this fic? I think that taking a year to finish it got you all those reviews! Only five chapters and more than a hundred reviews? That's wonderful, Safi-chan!
Can wait to see what your brilliant mind will come up with next!
Luv ya too, Safi-chan! :)
Do you have any advice for nightmares?
| Abbie8290 8/16/09 . chapter 5
Awesomeness! just plain awesomeness! Everything was great! i just cant believe its over! but it was a beautiful story and i loved how you mentioned the coat thing! cant wait for ur next one, you're a wonderful writer
| Rizu Neko-Chan 8/16/09 . chapter 5
I've got to hand it to you, you're really good with timing! Six days before I leave and you post the last chapter! Way to go! _ I'm so glad I got to read this! It was so cute. Yet somehow I can't see Kisshu and Ichigo doing some of that romantic stuff when Ichigo's six months pregnant. -shrugs- What do I know? xD Lol.
I WOULD say that I'm surprised that all of the original pairings (PuddingxTart, LettucexPai, KisshuxIchigo) stuck together are all getting married, but I heard a really cool story the other day. The parents of one of my friends had been dating since they were 12 and 13, and they're happily married now! I was so shocked when I heard that they had been dating for so long. Goes to show that stuff in romance novels really does work out, huh?
Enough of my ranting, though. Congrats on finishing the story! It was a pleasure to read (even if it did take a year to write!)
| theforgottencreatures 7/30/09 . chapter 4
IT WAS REALLY GOOD! PLZ UPDATE SOON! :P
| Mew of Fire 7/25/09 . chapter 4
this was so cute! i can't wait to read more!
| Fireflies Glow 7/25/09 . chapter 4
Oh my gosh, I've been meaning to review this for a while but there hasn't been enough time to write a long enough review!
So here goes. :)
First of all, this has to be the most fluff-tastic and adorable thing I've ever read. I am absolutely in LOVE with this! It's very well-written, creative and sweet. Every time I finish a chapter, I have a hard time wiping off a smile from my face.
One of the things I really love about this is the chapter titles. So sweet how they all have to do with seasons!
Another thing I really loved is the creative idea. Not only is it cute, but it's meaningful how you write everything. Like, you start each chapter with how long it's been. I love it!
Favorites (for 1. Snowed In):
[A small, white snowflake landed on her nose, causing her to sneeze as another shiver escaped her. Ichigo rubbed her palms together vigorously before rubbing up and down her arms through her dark pink turtleneck sweater. Damn Ryou for taking her coat!]
Aw, poor Ichigo. :( But this totally sounds like something Ryou would do!
[“Ichigo, is there someone there with you? A boy perhaps?”
The redhead had to quickly pull the phone away from her ear so as not to go deaf from her father’s yelling.
“WHAT? A BOY? THERE HAD BETTER NOT BE A BOY THERE OR I’LL-”
“Oh, stop it Shintaro! Ichigo is a big girl and can take care of herself! Okay sweetheart, have fun! Don’t do anything I wouldn’t do!”
“DON’T TURN OFF THAT PHONE SAKURA! DON’T-” The line went dead.]
Oh my gosh, this reminded me how much I love her parents. This part is a huge chunk, but it's hilarious!
Favorites (for 2. Spring Thaw):
[Kisshu was ecstatic. The girl he loved more than life itself, who had rejected his advances for so long, was finally returning his feelings. Not only that, but she was kissing him! He pulled her body flush against his as her hands slid up and tangled themselves in his silken green locks.]
I adore how you wrote this. It's fabulous!
[“You’re late too? That’s a first.” Ryou let out an exasperated sigh, rubbing his temples. “Just get changed and get to work.” And with that, he disappeared up the stairs, no doubt to grab some aspirin for his pounding headache.]
Haha, I couldn't help but laugh at this part.
Favorites (for 3. Summer Surprises):
[“And he asked you to test it out?”
The alien gave her a sheepish smile and scratched the back of his head guiltily. “Um…not exactly…”]
Lol. Another line that made me laugh.
[“What? I thought you liked guys with black hair and brown eyes.”
She grinned. “Actually, I prefer green-haired guys with golden eyes.” the mew teased.
Kisshu smirked in response. “Well, I have a thing for brown-eyed redheads. Although…” he grinned at the apprehensive look on her face. “I can’t say I don’t like girls with pink hair and pink eyes.”]
That's just so THEM. It's perfect!
Favorites (for 4. Autumn Antics):
[Nine months. These had been the best nine months of his life. He had just about everything he could ever want. Then why was he so nervous?
Because it was finally time.]
Talk about an amazing line. That, right up, there is gorgeous. Like, seriously. I love the way you wrote that!
[“It’s my Dad. He’s not really one for me dating, let alone having a boyfriend,” the cat mew giggled. “He nearly ripped Masaya’s head off the first time they met.”
Kisshu shook his head and chuckled, “I think I’m starting to like your father already.”]
Oh, Kisshu...! XD
[Kisshu lifted Ichigo off of her place on the grass and gently set her on his lap. He gave her a reassuring smile and softly caressed her cheek with the back of his hand. “Stop worrying Koneko-chan. I’ll win them over just like I did with you.” He gave Ichigo a chaste kiss before teleporting her to her front doorstep and disappearing. The cat mew sighed happily as she turned around and skipped through the door and up to her room.]
Aw! They are SO cute together!
[“How am I doing so far?” he whispered smoothly, sending a shiver of pleasure down her spine.
“You were doing better than Masaya for a bit. My dad almost cracked a smile…Well, until this little stunt. Now he’s glaring daggers at you” she replied with a small smirk.]
I'm really loving your interactions between the characters, and this part is no exception.
[A loud “BANG” made her jump into Kisshu’s lap, causing her black cat ears and tail to pop out. “Nya!” she yelped as her cheeks flushed bright pink.
Kisshu chuckled. “I love it when you blush,” he whispered, kissing her cheek.]
Oh my gosh, do I even need to explain anymore why I like this? :D
One last comment: you're an incredible author! :)
| NaturallyDumbBlonde 7/25/09 . chapter 4
Another great chapter D
I love how Kisshu remembered the anniversary, it shows how much her really cares about Ichigo (I'm a sucker for mushy stuff XD)
And I love Ichigo's dad, haven't watched the anime in a while so I forgot how awesome he was but this chapter reminded me xD (I'm totally glad he's not my dad though, that would suck p)
I love that he gave her a choker (it's as good as a marriage proposal to me D), and I love how you describe things!
I went back and re-read all the chapters and I just love the storyline X3
Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter (of LLF as well D)
| fanime013 7/25/09 . chapter 4
NYAW THAT WAS SO SWEET! please hurry with the next one. . . PLEASE!
| fanime013 7/25/09 . chapter 1
That was so AWSOME! your a great writer (unlike me) keep writing please... and write more TMM because your awsome and im jealous lol
| Kiichigo-chan 7/24/09 . chapter 4
Congratulations, this is definately one of the better Kisshu and Ichigo fanfics I have read. Your writing style is professional with minimal spelling and grammar errors. It was a very satisfying read and it really pulled me in. I'm happy to know that there are many people who, like me, think that Kisshu and Ichigo are meant to be together! One line that really made me laugh was when Kisshu flipped everyone a peace sign in part three... totally in character! So thank you for writing a story with just the right amount of action, character development and fluff!
| True Colours 7/23/09 . chapter 4
Yeah, I googled the boston tea party...ah, Kish is so sweet...he's pretty good at this boyfriend thing. And I'm glad he didn't propose, as at their age it would just be silly, and whether she turned him down or got pulled into a commitment she wasn't ready for it would probably damage their relationship. So did he bribe the attendant to stop the ride AND set off the fireworks, or just the ride?
The dad-interrogation scene - yes sir, no sir - was so Twilight. I loved thiswhole chapter KishuXIchigo fluff forever!
| True Colours 7/23/09 . chapter 3
Well, I think Masaya is so irritatingly perfect that he must have some nasty characteristics lurking under the surface. Sure he can be all charm to a girl when he's reeling her in but...ugh, he's just so boring compared to Kish, can we authors be blamed for giving him a hard time?
Are you a LettuceXPai fan? My sister, Essence of Gold, will love you! I think she's read this already. And I loved the whole dramatic holding Ichigo hostage nearly shooting Kish thing, and the way Masaya was just sitting there going '?'
| neofeliss 7/23/09 . chapter 4
Aw! This chapter was so, so cute! I preferred it a lot to the preceding chapter.
You got Ichigo's parents down pat! Especially Shintaro - I'm surprised he took the whole dating thing so well, especially considering Masaya...
Awesome job! And the park scene was so so cute.