If it weren't for the fact I'm laughing, I'd say you broke my brain. Though, you might have done that anyways.

Epic.

Truly epic.

No, seriously.

GREAT story! You should have had more reviews but too many read but don't write you kno? But it's great. Hopefully one of many more!

Wonderful one-shot! I lved the fact that you also implied the Light/L naughty stuff... I'm a BIG fan of the two of them... and "panda eyes" aww so cute. :-) Keep up the good work!

LOL! M. was right! This is SUCH a great story. She emailed me because she knows I'm a HUGE Death Note fan and I always look for something new and interesting. Your story is that. Your humor is very refreshing and the idea quite unexpected. I very much enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing and keep writing. It does look like you have it in you. :-)

LOL! That was SO great! Just the image of Rem and Ryuk attempting that kiss was oh-my-god hilarious! And the way you wrote Misa is just... FUNNY! What I REALLY loved is that you took your time building the comedy, because at first I really couldn't have guessed just how this could turn out! ... and was the fact that Raito came in kind of disheveled a hint? That was a delicious little bone there. ^.^

As to the writing, I loved the language you use, the descriptions and your style. You really should write more... like say... a Raito/L scene... hint hint hint...

Congrats! An amazing one-shot. :-)