Hey girl, u rocks! xD
I love this fic! It is so cool that i reed it in 3 days! huashuashuashu

I love it when they got in Shrek's world! xp

It was so cute and funny! x)

I'm already reading the next one! ^^

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"Before anyone asks how it’s possible that Roxas can be healthy when Sora is not, when they share one body, the answer to that is simple: I have no clue so just nod your head and go along with it? Ok? OK!"

Just smile and nod right? XD

Your story is very interesting - I'll say more once i get to the end.

at least that's what I think

No offence to the fic and to the name you gave it (it's actualy pretty close) actualy Kairi's keyblade is Flowering Strangth, crafted from Riku's memorise of Destiny Island.

I liked the story but it felt like you were skipping a few chapters

YEAH Kingdom Key no one uses the one

You gave Sora a last name, cool. but, it kinda reminds me of digimon

Another Keyblade War?! OH SNAPZ. This is so amazing. o.o
Must... continue... READING. *twitch*

Very well done so far (I'm at chapter 19) And a very good rendition of the disney characters! you've captured the PotC characters perfectly. Excellent job!!

That was great story, I couldn't stop reading it and read all the way to the end. Got to say I like the twist with the whole hints of what was to come like Roxas staring at the mysterous keyblade him and Namie had on there stain glass images. Great story and got to say it was one of the best.

-blinks tears out of eyes-

So...beautiful...

Haha, no, sorry. That was great. Really, I love how you tie in the Twilight's Destiny thing! THERE IS HOPE! Lol.

can't wait to finish!!

Wow. I've recently started reading some of these chaptered future Kingdom Hearts fics, and yours is by far my favorite. Genuinely! You keep it so interesting and have the most agreeable OCs I've ever read! And everyone is so in-character. It's almost like actually playing Kingdom Hearts.

I don't know if I can really say anything other than just outright gushing...um...spelling mistakes! yes! there are a few of those. Maybe get a beta reader for stuff like that. Otherwise, amazing work.
I can't wait to finish this and start your sequel.
Great job!

hey! you got the title from that one linkin park song didnt you? i shud know, hence my pen name. Kick@ss story though!!

Considering I just read this whole story I figured I'ld leave at least one review ^_~. In case your wondering how I ever came across this I stumbled onto the sequel, and things just have to be done in order!

Very nice. I've read a lot of Kingdom Hearts fics but I don't think /can recall one where Riku is forever known as 'Silver'. I like the change of pace, sometimes things do just get over done.

You mentioned a 'Final Mix' version of this, and I have just a few comments. In some chapters it was hard to understand what was going on at first. In particular Bleed it Out (love the title btw, Linkin' Park rocks!) and some that follow it. Maybe if you extend the actions a little backwards in time so we know what went on. Oh, and your filler chapters. They do seem rather pointless to me (I haven't read the second one yet though so perhaps they may make sense later). Granted they don't really propel the action but fillers can be useful to actually teach us things about the characters, worlds, evil plots, and so on. Commonly they are used to show a growing connection or disconnection between two people. So with a little editing these filler chapters could be a little meatier. But these are just comments from another who is lacking herself (you're welcome to read my stuff...if you dare. I warn you, I'm awful) so they are just suggestions.

God i hate endings! now i have to find anouther great story to read! i liked your kh story and i think you said something about a second story, so i can't wait for the next!