Haha!! Good story!

Great story! It was hilarious! I like the confrontation at the end with Weir. One of my favorite parts is "Does that include living together?" Laura asked. "Yes, as a proper married couple," Elizabeth replied. "Is that a problem?" Love that part. Great job.

Cute idea. What is the rule in the blue book?

I think they would be a good couple.

Read this quickly so I could get on with the sequel. Not a pairing I would have thought of but it worked out well.

Whee, 'nother Lorne/Cadman author!

BTW, I think your idea is rather nice, even if it may be cliché. Not all cliché has to be bad ;) And even if it was short, it was nice to read.

I really enjoyed reading your story. I like reading about Cadman and Lorne. Not many out there. I hope that you write more on this one though because you kind of left this hanging.