this is a excelent story and i cant wait to read more, so please update soon, but one thing that bugs me about the labyrinth, is the jareth is the goblin king, but he dosent seem to be all that strong, so im wondering if theres more magic that he just hasent shown, and will harry get this as he grow's older, anyway till ur next update ja ne

awesome story please update soon

Oh please continue this story. I've been wanting to know what happens for months! Hope you're okay.

~ Excessive Reader ~

what happens when the goblin king finds out? i just imagined an owl flying into the great hall before becoming the goblin king and yelling at dumby. amusing if impossible. also someone should tell jareth Sr that his clothes leave nothing to the imagination.

is anyone going to find out that jareth's mail has been intercepted?

Interesting story, I can't wait to read more.

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Everything written & described well in this here chapter from start 2 finish

Very goodly & neat @ the same time

Very goodly written well also

I like it, so very goodly

Hope Jareth realises his letter wasn't recieved. Poor mini Jareth being treated like that just because he's not entirely human. Stupid wizards. Keep up the good work!

Very good plot line. Interesting twists on all of the characters. Keep it up.

i like this a lot. what a unique take on the life of Harry Potter. I'm surprised that Snape isn't more sympathetic.

I'm not entirely sure what to think of this, but I'm willing to read more. I was expecting different things to happen, but it's good that my expectations didn't come true. I find it amusing that a Slytherin, a Ravenclaw, and a Gryffindor are friends, I think you need a Hufflepuff.

Is Hermione really related to a banshee?

I love it so far.