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cagallisupporter
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abuseThat is a beautiful story, I really love it. Are you going to make it complete to a happy ending?

the wine part...I don't know that well either, but I think you make them very suitable for this story. I almost beileve you are a frequent bar goer, so I think you are pretty successful about the part.
cottongreentea
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was a great oneshot! I wish i could take on 40 percent alcohol. I could only do like 15. I really want to try 'sex on the beach.' It's suppose to be extremely good! ..

Aw... i hope the next oneshot is when they get together. She does have his jacket to return. Who knows! Maybe they even created something that only a man and woman can create together! My fingers are crossed!
-deviLish-baBy-
2008-06-04
ch 1,
abusethis story is great, really. but somehow when i read it, it makes me sad. it made me feel want to cry. well, i just hope that u will make this a happy ending. no, i beg you to make this happy ending, pretty please??
Sundowners.
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseDo you know, that you are simply a genius at writing? I've not been reading AsuCaga fics for very long, but reading this fic has sparked my love for the pairing again.
Hades.Throne.Heiress
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseHow you ended this first part was so sad, and they were only 'bonded eternally with an endless promise' just a couple hundred words ago. I hope it's a happy ending (no matter how cliche and typical those might be), update soon =)
AsuCagafan
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abusePlease continue this! This is so nice! Onegai! ^_^
dinah
2008-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseive got to tell you that you impressed me by having an extra long chapter without allowing readers like me getting bored.. i prefer long written rather than shorter but crappy writing.. yours is wonderfully done. hopefull that you will continue on this piece since im really looking forward for athruns reaction after knowing that cagalli had left.. and why did she left btw, because she knew what she had been doing the whole night didnt she? well ill wait for the next one to be put up... (*0*)!
shiloah18
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuselol Yzak tricks Athrun for a drink or two? *chuckLes*

*sighs* pOor Yzak.. he thought he had won over Athrun when it came to drinking eh? oh weLL.. -_-

haha.. Athrun brings a drunken Yzak after their drinking session home eh? *giggLes* pOor guy.. he'd never know what happened.. XD

lol they pretended to be gay? O_O *Laughing her head oFf* nice one! XD

Athha..

she did that for ORB! she didn't do it for herseLf.. XC

his rOom? or his bed? *grins*

“You Lose Athrun! You Lose!”.. “I’m the winner! I’m the winner!”
“You win, you win.” lol XD

both grEen? the President of Britain, isn't his eyes brown?
"The weLL-buiLt young man with deep brown eyes.."

he wouLd gLare at the ouji-sama? lol gOod thing he wears his shades, ne?

"accidentaLLy" eh? *grins*

"Don't go." bet he wanted to hear that from her a Long time ago, ne?

just one kiSs.. and that sent her of the edge? ^^

rare circumstances? Like when they first met each other? ^_^

ah! hickeys! Love bites! whatever you caLL them..! XD

nyWeiZ, this kinda reminded me of "ResiLience" by PaoLaAdara demo, in that one.. Cags was drunk.. xp and there's this other thrEe shot fic wherein it's AsuCaga getting a drink in aLL thrEe diFferent occasions.. I can't remember the titLe though.. ^.^v kawaii fic!1 yes, it's cute in it's own way.. suteki! jaa ne in your next update! ;3
AsuCaga01
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseWow,nice story,but i think,they should end vup hapy and together here..Update soon,coz classes are drawing near,i mean NEAR!hehehe...Update...^_^
Lanelle Black
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseIt was perfect! *.*
The sad end got made depressed ;.;
If you please continue, do a happy ending... XD
o//
michi
2008-05-30
ch 1, anon.
abusei love it...
fdhe
2008-05-30
ch 1, anon.
abuse& where is cagalli going?! bring her back to athrun soon! :)
Teca No Shinju
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseLove it, love it, love it.

Not that it really makes much difference to me, but I am assuming you are ignoring the extra scenes from Destiny Plus? Where Lacus is in charge of Plants and Kira is an official Zaftie. Again, I love the fic as is, but I was just curious. Can't wait to read the other chapter!
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