A very soulful fic, very well written. ^^ Beautiful fic!

HEY! that was very well written!! i love ur asucaga stories!!

KEEPP up that awesome work! :)

Written well, my dear. Good job. :)

:O that was so good! i wish this was the ending to gundam seed destiny :(
keep up the good work!

I liked it. Very nicely done. I love possessive male leads! The scene with Athrun and the Scandinavian fellow was truly terrific! Thank you~

i really like this story..great job!

I rarely (never) read romance stories. I always thought about them as nothing more than piles of gibberish made by rabid, hormone-driven fangirls.

And to tell the truth I decided to read this story out of pure chance. It's 2:49 am here and I'm trying to write a project to which a deadline is barely a day away. I decided to take a short break for a moment and decided to browse some stories, mostly to amuse myself by reading a story, written by one of the aforementioned fangirls, so I started browsing the romance section to find a random story to read.
Out of pure chance I picked out a story that was the complete opposite of what I was looking for.

Saying that your story blew my mind is a major understatement. Your story, written about a couple I'm not a big fan of nonetheless, managed to make such an impression that I simply HAD to read it entirely. Excellent job!

The story itself was well-written and had a bit of that bitter-sweet taste to it for a while. Something I despise and love at the same time. One thing that I really enjoyed, was your way of writing. Until the last part of the story I couldn't tell for sure, whether Athrun and Cagalli would stay together or not. Once again, excellent job!

- Asmus

*sighs again* eviL review thingy.. here's the other haLf of the first haLf of my review.. >.< redundancy.. ugh.. >_<

"..she thought that she was wouLd make a better other haLf for him than her." how about omitting the "was"?

Athrun's a separate category aLL together, ne?

I wonder.. does Kira remind Athrun of CagaLLi.. I mean.. they're twins, ne? XD

*gasps* Yzak punched Athrun's pretty face?! oh my.. o.o and lol Yzak reaLLy Likes caLLing peopLe by their surnames, ne? XD

♫Love wiLL Lead you back..♪

yeah.. his back to normaL aight.. if you mean returning to that empty sheLL he was before that night "normaL".. >_<

"..onLy to for it to turn into a dead cLue." how about omitting the first "to"?

“I wiLL make sure she wiLL never step into Scandinavia again as a singLe woman.” wOohOo! go Athrun! *squeaLs*

does Athrun seat on the same seat he was when he and CagaLLi had a drink?

*sighs* she's Like a ghost to him, ne?

"Having an eFficient boSs wouLd means Loads of work and overtime for them." means? mean?

they say that sLeEp is the best escape demo, I gueSs even his dreams won't Let him do that.. ;{

"Athrun the workahoLic" eh? lol nice one Kira! XD

lol no wonder you're so fat in SEED cLub, Kira.. aLL you have in your mind is fOod, foOd and more.. FOOD! XD

"..there are destined to be together forever." there? they?

Cags in a white dreSs? she couLd've joined the angeLs with her bLonde hair as her haLo.. ;)

"..and found each other again," found? find?

so wait a sec.. Athrun was behind Cags, ne? for when he LoOked up and when she turned.. their gazes met, ne?

"The Legend of the Square of AngeLs did not matter to them. The pLace is a speciaL pLace for them, and that is the most important thing." the same goes for AsuCaga.. ;')

hmm.. if Athrun was in front of the group of tri-angeLs and CagaLLi was behind them.. wouLdn't that make them facing each other? with the group in betwEen them? just asking.. >.<

nyWeiZ, kawaii! kawaii deshou fic! ah.. the romance.. *sighs* jaa ne in your other fics! ;3

P.S. if you have time.. pLease check out my friend's first AsuCaga AMV.. (yes, yes.. I'm promoting it for her..) there's a Link to it on my profiLe.. the same goes for her new AMV dedicated to aLL AsuCaga fans as an advance Christmas gift.. thanks in advance! jaa! =3

R's/N: xure hope this works.. *croSses her fingers and cLicks the "Submit FeEdback/Review" button* here goes! >.

*sighs* there's something wrong with this review thingy again.. just Like in my review on "Crusade" by Minerva's CradLe.. oh weLL.. here's the rest of my review for this fic:

"..for she had given him _ promise of an eternaL future.." miSsing Letter..

"His kept his green eyes hidden behind his weary eyeLids," the first "his".. is it that or "he"?

hmm.. CagaLLi's outfit reminds me of ALex Dino.. and lol she's wearing a skirt! XD

Ooh.. she toOk on her okaa-san's name eh?

"..have anyone ever toLd you that you resembLe the Princess a Lot?” have? has?

uh.. the jacket Athrun wore when they were at the bar.. was it his ALex Dino one? haha.. can't rememeber.. >.

"Athrun heLd a sLight pang of jeaLousy for the young Leader, for their eyes were both green, aLbeit a diFferent shade," hmm.. you were onLy pertaining to the Leader of Chinese Eurasia, ne? lol now I get it.. >.<

I had to read "MeLody of the Night" again to remember what this fic is aLL about.. and since you mentioned the song you were Listening to whiLe writing that chap.. I Listened to it tOo.. and.. it's reaLLy nice to Listen to that song.. very reLating.. ^^

"..expecting to sEe her going through her documents there." her documents? she had Left a few with him?

"He sprinted to him room.." him? his?

Athha..

Ooh.. Kisaka's LoveLife eh? *chuckLes* cute.. XD

"..which was directLy under the supervision of he Orb Chairman at that time," he? the?

hmm.. I'm not used to caLLing the Representative of ORB as "Chairman".. that kinda suits the Leader of PLANTS.. lol demo, this is your fic so.. might as weLL get on with it.. :D

"..she picked on the bad habit of bottLing every up within her." every? everything?

"Kisaka couLd sEe it in the eyes of _ man in front of him." miSsing word..

oh boy.. Athrun turns into a parrot when he's haLf-crazy.. >..

very intriguing... i really liked it... GOOD JOB!

wow, really love it! it's great. i really cried of what become to athrun after Cagalli left him. it's kinda sad in the beginning and the progress after cagalli's departure. i really happy for them in the end they reunited. in usual time i'll think the ending part a bit cheesy but wow, now i really thought it was soo romantic and no corny at all. you do a very wonderful job writing this chapter and i hope u could make some epilogue of this >< I'll look forward for your another installation ^^

Love it!By the way, what movie were you referring to here "trailer of the new movie but it has..."?

kya~ i like it~ \(^_^)/...i really like this story...it's heartwarming, expressive and well, just...so good~...please continue writing an asucaga fanfic...i'm looking forward for your next story...well done

i would greatly appreciate if you could kindly continue this lovely piece; maybe in a different title but as a follow up on their meeting...just imagine a romantic meeting after two years, crying thier hearts out after confessing their love to each other and make love in the romantic city of italia (hhehe).. i found myself crying in the beginning of the story and i thought to myself that you are an awesome writer that you can make a reader such as myself cried for this and im a tough nut to crack im telling you..(*0*)!