Shit, why didn't you say there would be prose later on? I almost backed out of this fic when I was slammed with a wall of chat-style dialogue, and then I would have missed out on so. much. fun. I had to stop and hide my head under a pillow while I laughed helplessly more than once. I'm serious. Because looking at the screen would have been too much. And the witty repartee - was exactly that. You did a great job and really lit up my night. Oh no, now you've got me doing it too.

This is pretty good so far! The image of L and Light having cybersex still makes me giggle, though. The one thing that's bugging me is that someone hasn't immediately come to the conclusion of an angry spouse/lover replacing his brain with his penis because 'he thinks with his penis, not his brain'.

Here I was, thinking I was reading L saying something very romantic and it turns out all he was saying was," My very good fuck." Lolz.

Correct me if I'm completely confused, but weren't you the author of a fic called Well Met by Moonlight? It was one of my favourites and it has inexplicably disappeared...

This was SOOO good! I love L and Light together! .

I can't believe how obsessed I got with this story that I decided to review in every chapter but daaaaamn... here I am on the last and I didn't realize it O.o

This was extremely hilarious and interesting; seems like I end up loving every story you write... and you for writing them xD

If this was a doujin... I WOULD DEFINITELY BUY IT. EVERY. COPY.

...Just. Loved it.

"Nice screen? Can I fondle your keys? Let me trace the outline of your L? Hm, actually that is quite sexy – what the fuck is wrong with me today!"

ROFL. You have such a knack for romantic comedies...

Barely 3rd chapter and I'm twisting in laughter!

Aaaaand... Lois Lexington? ISEEWHATYOUDIDTHERE.

Lul, LOVE this story so far.

great story and sooooo hot :D

hope we get to read another one :)

nonononooonoo! L HAVE to be uke, he is all uke! XD no Light he is more seme!

A bit perverted (who am I kidding?), but since I loved it, I can't complain. I Loved the general idea and I can't wait to get started on the sequel.

Just finished reading the story. I loved it. I cracked up in the chapter where light's dad tries to ask his son about his sexual preferences but he keeps getting interrupted by all the crazy crap that keeps happening. So when's the sequel?

i really enjoyed this storry, it was the fist ever au storry ive read because i tend to avoid them i like to stick to the reall story. but this was really great very well written i just couldent stor reasing it i think it was the fastest ive ever read anything. the only part i dident like was when it ended XD

Maskelyne is L. Lumiere is Light?

writing L

Light knows. Or not?

Somehow, Raito decided that this message probably wasn't from L.

Maskelyne?

I don't need to sleep! Not at all!

He just doesn't want L to observe him through camera.

"But the three of them traveled together,"

Are you sure?

Black hair could be a decoy, like a wig. Why would it be seen from under a helmet?

Ryuuzaki wants Light to figure it out.

Light figured it out while in wardrobe, comparing L's and Ryuzaki's words to him.

Aren't there any locks on the doors?

"He's not so hard to understand. We have a lot in common." "Yeah?" Matt smiled and lit up another cigarette. "Then God help us all."

Amusement.

Do I want my life to be that interesting? Hell, yes.

"This stupid pride of mine," Raito muttered to himself, "I'll give it up."

Reference to giving up the Death Note...

I wouldn't be surprised if he brought a bicycle or a three course meal out of those pockets.

Mary Poppins?

He wants to trust me, but I have to do it first so that he can.

Reciprocation... Equality...

Good luck, L and Light, Watari and Near, Mello and Matt. Even though I haven't seen Mello yet?

i the pair that put the fun in dysfunctional /i

*laughing* u r so so right! :D also, wonderful writing :)