ewwwieee,

j/k

not bad but couldn't finish,

Still your talent shows!

Godspeed!

LOL! I also thought it was going to be KinnisonXShiro or something... Cause Shiro's wolfy. But Luca, LOL when he appeared in I just laughed my ass off! That is some funny stuff. I didn't know that was a popular pairing though. I don't mind yaoi, I just don't think Luca fits as a yaoi person. _; But yeah, more Luca fics! He's so neglected... Poor thing.

Not bad _. I really like The Kinnison x Luca pairing, It's one of my favs...Heh. Anyway, I loved the idea behind your story, not to mention it's better when the Mad Prince isn't quite so...MAD. Doesn't make much sense, now does it? Well, my only piff is that you should have made it longer! I liked it! Write more! Oh, oh...How about a Seed story? I like Seed, Many people like Seed! Seed is pretty! He may not be THE sharpest sword on the rack, but he has passion! Yes...Passion...*giggles*

o_0 ... For the first time, I'm speechless. Did you happen to visit Lady Maiko's doumei sections of read her stories? You might like it(if you haven't), for it's mostly Luca/Kinnison... Anyway, review! The context of the story I don't think General fits the description. _0 Well, that's up to you! All in all, it was um... not really so funny as most fairytale fics I've come across, but still, it's worth some time reading! Keep it up!