Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Very sweet!

two words...hot and intense

lovely interlude. i like eager-to-please alec.

Very romantic and yet still very hot. Love it!

That was sweet and hot. Work a little on spelling/grammar, and it'll be even better. Wasn't quite sure why him entering would cause her pain- it wasn't a first. Really liked it.

I would have liked to see your background from your author's note built into the story. Or if I have that wrong then I suggest a definate gap or line to denote the separation of story and author's notes. Your grammar and spelling need work, there's room for improvement. I see two others have reviewed and gushed over the storyline I'll let them and others do that. Remember this it takes courage to post your work. So be proud that you have done that.
RRaine

RRaineTerra

Ripples of Water

awesome! lol i loved it. well-written!

ariana

That was so HOT! Loved everything about it! Max is one lucky girl! One of the best fics i have read this year!

Pand