Love the story!

In chapter 7, you sometimes write Kabuto when I think you mean Mizuki..

This story deserves a lot more love than it has.

Omg, I just read the whole thing in, like, an hour and half, and I wanna go back and read it again. It has everything I love in a story (rape, torture, overly protective boyfriends...) and it was well-written, too.
I loved Genma... generally, I don't, so that's really saying something.
And, omg, fucking Izumo and Kotetsu... I only wish that they were in more of the story It just made me giggle, that one line in their introduction. "If real brothers did what we did, they'd be locked up." lol.

Overall, just an awesome piece of fiction and I hope more people read it and leave you much-deserved love.

Great story. I feel so repetitive with what I say in reviews but honestly I usually always read good stories [in my eyes]. This was sure as hell one of them. I loved it sooo much.

aaarrrggghhh! f i were n this story, id be an assasin kill that bulshit mizuki. i mean u did a realy good job w/ his prsonality n this fic. i totaly h8 him! so sadist masochistic! anyway i realy like d idea on hw Kakashi loves Iruka so much. gud thng n d last chp mizuki is dead. at last! i'l b rooting 4 ur future fics! (hope u can send me ur reply!) Ja na!

Gah mizukis a creep...

Holly shitaky mushrooms!

oh i liked that one, too short thought, and I would have like more lovey dovey smut, and the Mizuki...wow I've never read a more f*ucked one the him, he got what he deserved, and Kakashi was so sweet... I loved it, that for sharing your work

I loved this fic; very dramatic and pretty well-written.

My only complaint was that we only got a few paragraphs of Izumo and Kotetsu. XD ch

cool

yay happy ending! thank you for this! it was sad, and bloody, and strangely entrancing to read. ]

realy god! i mean perfect! and i dont use that term lightly! mind you.

muffinsbloody crumpets,

jamie sensei

amazing and fantastic.. is there gonna be a sequel?

This was an absolutely wonderful story. I shied away from it at first because I don like the psycho Misuki stories and this one was full of it. Still, I enjoyed reading it very much and I'm glad for the happy ending. Thanks for sharing.

Absolutely a beautiful piece of work. Amazing description, characterization, content, plot, and staying steady with your pre-set facts, and your setting is absolutely gorgeous.

One of the best stories I've ever read, I'm gonna go read others.

hmm a bit rushed but an interesting read all the same...thank you for writing it!