 shimmershadow30 2009-02-15 . chapter 1hahahahaha Sunstreaker rocks!! !! !! !! !! !! !! !! !! !! i love it :p |
 Starstreak 777 2008-06-23 . chapter 1I wonder who convinced Sunshine to give that to Mirage; Ratchet or Sideswipe?
See, Mirage, Sunshine does have a heart! |
 Hemlock Dalise 2008-06-03 . chapter 1I think that the only coherent thought that went through my head when I finished that was "Wow"...
Your writing has the sort of 'tone' to it that writers try for years to achieve, it's beautiful to hear.
Incredible story, really, one of the rarely-seen sides of Sunstreaker comes to the fore. Is Sunny's artistry a fanon or canon thing? |
 HitokiriKurisuta 2008-06-01 . chapter 1D'aaw, sweet. :3 We all know that the big yellow lug is a softy on the inside. lol
...And now Mirage and Hound know, too. XD |
 Neurquadic 2008-06-01 . chapter 1Haha, this was short, but cute. lol, Mirage is on drugs, Mirage is on drugs! >xD Sorry, I just find that insanely funny for some reason. >. |
 Dragowolf 2008-05-31 . chapter 1Aw! Sunny is giving his thanks to Mirage for saving one he cares deeply about.
Very cute! And the Hound/Mirage is wonderful!
Love it! This was such a cute one shot!
It was very very good! |
 Bluebird Soaring 2008-05-31 . chapter 1Very sweet =) I just love stories with that flip side of Sunny - his beautiful handwriting and artistic ability...He's a passionate mech really! It takes passion to paint and passion to fight...good balance IMO. I hope Rageai feels better soon =) |
 j's 91 2008-05-31 . chapter 1 Ditto what they all said.
Not only does it cover all the Sunny bases, but in one chapter, too!
Mirage would be one to appreciate a gift like that... |
 Tobias 2008-05-30 . chapter 1Very nice! Great work, I really like it.
It's an great idea and it was written out really well. Good job! |
 Nightlight09 2008-05-30 . chapter 1Oh this was lovely! Very sweet, and such a Sunstreaker thing to do!
Though, the artist side of me wants to thwap Mirage for touching a painting! :-P |
 playswithworms 2008-05-30 . chapter 1ha ha - only Sunstreaker would wake up an injured 'bot to (sort of) thank him, and aw, poor doped up Mirage. Sunny must have been quite the artist if Mirage grew up seeing replicas of his work! Marvelous little gem of a fic :)
(hope rageai feels better) |
 flamingmarsh 2008-05-30 . chapter 1this was a nice fic =) |
 AutobotStarlight 2008-05-30 . chapter 1This was a cute little fic. Love how you portrayed all of Sunny's sides. Great job! |
 Carmilla DeWinter 2008-05-30 . chapter 1Aww. Wonderfully nice feel-good fic for late in the evening.
And I didn't find any mistakes, either. |
 WildWelshWitch 2008-05-30 . chapter 1breathtakingly charming. That's all I can say ^_^ |