ha, Cloud still doesn't trust Chyrin.
And PLEASE update soon
I also don't think that Chyrin would actually be able to kill Genesis... considering he's an insane killing machine(also ex-SOLDIER) and Chyrin is just a teenage girl skilled with a sword.
This one also wonders why he kidnapped her mother.

ok, i've read this story once, and now im reading it again so as to understand the next chapters. i was just reading the fouth chapter and i saw the part where Chyrin goes, "Got it memorized?" and i thought, 'wow, what if when you finish this story, something happens and she gets transported again, like in the beginning? but instead of FF she ends up in Kingdom Hearts, like on Destiny Islands or Twilight Town or something?' that would be so cool. i dunno, maybe i was spoutin crap or somethin, but maybe not. i dunno wat ur gonna do wit this, like add a sequal or somethin, so i thought that i could try to give u an idea.think it over, k? and can u post the answer at the end or the beginning of ur next chapter so that i kno whethter or not u even gave it a chance? that would b helpful. SHAJI! gomen for bothering u.

glomps author thanks for the update nice wording it helps with imagining it

more soon plz

Oh snap! Epic fight ahead! Genesis better watch out!

i think that was the best chapter yet yet. loved it, like tv in your head!

adhskhasdtewurlj!

GENISIS! *grabs him by the hair and pulls him out from under her bed* WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO THAT FOR!

Anyway! cant wait for the next capter!

GO CHYRIN KICK HIS ASS! lol think i got to caught in the story lol anyway lovin it loads so hurry and update soon pweese XD

Yay an update! Sweet! Good job!!

Epic story... I can just relate to the fangirling. XD

MY favorite part was the end of this chapter, but the stuff with yuffie was pretty amusing. just please be extra careful with chyrin, i would hate to see her be turned into a mary sue

The action is picking up! have I ever writen how awesome this story is? Well, if i did, I'm saying it agian! lol. This truely is THE best our-world/FFVII-world crossover I've ever read. And I've read a ton a that kind of crap too. I can not wait to read more!

Yep. Either that, or toss 'em in the ocean to use as chum.

Is 'damnedest' a word? XD Creative!

'I got a surprisingly depressing amount of reviews last chapter. :['

Aww... there there.. Don't worry, I still love this story, it's just I have nothing constructive to say. -shrug-