Hm,interesting, Very interesting.

Please work on a new chapter!

now that's an experience unlike any other !

take your time but do update :)

very good story, but i have no idea how to continue

Wow thats some really strong tiberium ju-ju crystal.

hehe..juju

So he planes to get out using his powers. like the ability to shoot crystal

Again a nice chapter but I kinda feel it doesnt have the emotions of the first one. You should try to add in the overall atmosphere of the NOD camp eg fanatisicm / the militants being coerced into doing stuff. You have to make the reader feel for the characters.

Really nice story - shows how the lil' grunts feel when getting shot at. A bit sad at the end though. I think there should definitely be a sequel.

WOW!

an insiders view of a GDI worhtless battle on about a spike.

And how it feels to be hulocinated.

And what its like in a spike.

YEs i say there should be a sequal!

(can i get a part?)