Your stories are so well-written that it makes me want to read more and more. Simply beautiful...

Beautiful.

Wow...

At first I didn't understand the whole 'red sand' but my thought was that Deidara decided to kill himself and the sand was red from blood. That's why he couldn't feel and it was getting harder to breathe.

No clue if I'm right but that's my thought.

Awesome! i like the ending:
There you go, calling my name again as I lay my head down upon the red sand, now violet from the approaching darkness. It is warm, Sasori, as if you are wrapping your arms around me. I close my eyes now and dig my hands into the hot sand, looking for any trace of soil. At least I think the sand might be hot. It was a few hours ago. I cannot feel anything now except for my body shaking.

It is getting harder to breathe for some reason…
That is very creative GREAT JOB! =3

Sadd. D: really deep and poetic though! this was extremely sweet. :]

OMG! That's.. so.. sad...*
shakes by sobbing so hard* But it's amazing... *speechless*