Too lazy to log in...but I really liked this one! Very well written and I like how you captured the emotions without seeming melodramatic, and your use of action to further convey those emotions. Well done!

This is excellent! You know that I always love Dorothy. thanks for writing this, I see another realistic interpretation of her. Hm. And this kinda makes me want to try my hand on Mariemaia. The girl was a challenge in herself and you write her well effortlessly. Love this!*favorites(Er, btw..You're going to write a twilight fic, right? Can't wait for that. I'm planning to write one too, but I'm quite busy with GW at the moment. I'm a soon-to-be JasperxAlice shipper. He!)

You capture Dorothy beautifully. Your insight into Mariemaia is, as usual, superb but it's your Dorothy who really shines here. Biting, caustic Dorothy who is so kind in her own way. I love the relationship between these two. They're two of my favorite characters and this piece reminds once again just why that is. Marvelous!

How could I have forgotten Dorothy in my list a few fics ago? Duh! She's another one I've thought of writing with Mariemaia, and I think there are still some interesting possibilities that could be explored with them... What I like most about this, I think, was that it brought up the question we must all have wondered about at some point or another did Treize know about Mariemaia? And if so, how did he feel about her? The necklace was very touching. I also liked the parallel in Mariemaia/Dorothy's grandfathers a very interesting point I hadn't thought about before!

i liked this one, mainly just because its kinda interesting to see the interactions between Mariemaia and Dorothy. Neither of which i particularly like but you write them well. *thumbs up*

Oh, wow, I just LOVED THIS. You capture these Marie and Dorothy who are such difficult and complex characters so well. Another beautiful piece.

I wonder what RElena's action meant however. I would think it was a mixutre of bemusement (thinking of how typical of Dorothy), and agreement. Hmm.

Keep these pieces coming...even though you're beating me to the punch with my own ideas. GR. :P