That was absolutely delightful! The only cruel or bad part to this was the lack of continuing. It was fresh and exciting, ripe with potential and well executed. The situation was so original, it is a real shame only one chapter was devoted to it. To say nothing of the inherent humor that was also very well done. Loved this and thank you for writing even this one chapter.

heya, there is never enough Tyr/Trance shipping...and the setting is great...pleaze write more

COntnue please I love trance and tyr fan fiction more more more

Hi I wish you would continue with chapter 2 there is definitly not enough TranceTyr fiction on the net)

I really like this one! I hope you continue soon!

please continue. so far its very... interesting.

Good story. I really got interested into because I am into unusual pairings. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice quote. This story has promise, please continue.

Great story! It's nice to see a different pairing. I hope you continue the story.

Is there more?

You write Tyr's dialogue and thoughts so well. Good job. Please keep writing.

I'll be interested to see how this progresses it's fun!

Great start. Bonded? Yeah, really liked the fic. Hope more chapters are coming soon. Hope trance causes a bit of trouble for tyr, and that he gets all 'protective'. *evil grin)

This is neat. Please write more

Excellent! Well written. I loved Trance in this. How funny! I do hope you plan to continue this. Great job!
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