That was really good and creepy :)

I'm pretty crazy about your Darkward! And I think you're doing great with the sex scene! Keep it up!

Loved the story, and I can not wait for the sequel! What is Carisle going to do? What can he do?

Don't apologise! This is awesome!

I think your lemon is fantabulous. Keep up the good work. Yes, I did the same thing with the "Bella" line.

I absolutely love your story! I can't wait to start reading the sequel!

I am loving this story. I like the dark Edward but would to see Bella be more fiesty.

Wow, this is really hot. I'm so freaking tired but i keep hitting next chapter. i thought about this concept so much when i read the books, so i'm glad you have written about it. He is so dark but it's so hot!

i think that was so good apart from the fact that when you think about vampires can't sweat but otherwise totaly awersome :D

Ung, god, sexy Edward!

Don't think he could have hot breath though...

I have no memory of SM explaining periods either.

LOL! Sex scenes ARE hard to write. I swear, in my fic, I put off Bella losing her virginity for as long as possible. I kept wishing there was a way to skip that whole "deflowering" part.

"You will learn now." Oh! Hot!

That was deliciously dark and fabulous – can’t wait to read the sequel

Well he did keep warning her that he was dangerous. Damn that was hot (or cold as the case maybe... ;-)

Crikey - and that was just the warm up...