 bottlecaps 2009-07-21 . chapter 1Hey sweetie. I think your poem is wonderful. Its really deep. I just...would like to recommend something. As a self-harmer myself, I can see it from your friend's point of view. I don't know if your friend knows you wrote this, and as such, you might want to consider changing the title so that it isn't...isn't as harsh, is what I'm trying to say. I know how confused you must be feeling about taylor right now. If there is anything I can do, anything I can help you with, just send me a reply or a private message. I hope I don't come across as rude. I didn't mean to. Its just...the title is a little, it just doesn't feel right. *hugs* I'm sorry. Good poem though. |