good background

i still think its disturbing that u r playing that movie

sly

Hi! Hishonami is back

I finally found time to read u'r storry

It's...Disturbing in the biggining,

but caught my eye quick
good job

SLy

this is really good! i'm very intrigued, i must say, especially about the identity of the slightly omnipotent (okay, u can't be SLIGHTLY omnipotent- but im sure u know what i mean) narrator. Anyhow, keep it up- this is v different to everything I've read, and it strives to answer a good question about the predatory characters. (And anthropology as a subject sounds cool- not offered in my school)

One word of advice: lengthen. Your chapters are much too short. I like the idea, I really do (it makes me think), but having short chapters make it bitter-sweet and not happy at all.

Dude. I like this. So different... and odd, but I like it. I'll be back for this one.

I would not want to be in a classroom with THAT guy.

Very impressive, Jenger. Your work never ceases to interest me.

Ha I fixed it! Embarassed no longer! I have stuff to balence out my humor fics now.

This is very fascinating so far and a very unique twist on how all the animals get along. I hope you post more regularly. Are any SF people going to be in it (I can't remember if you mentioned that in the summary). Anthro is a very good class, I took it myself a few years ago and like you, I recommend it.

Dusterbingly funny, I leave it at that.

Don't read this, it's bad, very bad. I cut out a lot of it and am attempting to piece it tougether again...kinda like humpty dumpty -if he were a disorganized and poorly planned melding of schoolwork and fanfic- sigh

I do have to wonder, what was this supposed to be about? I know you said it was for your Anthropology class... but... what... weird. o_O

what the hell was that!

Cool, this is great. A little creepy ,but great all the same

Hmm... very intriguing! I really liked the descriptions Jenger-like poetry.