 Newey 2009-07-29 . chapter 1LOL! That's got to be the funniest story I've read on Fanfiction |
 ilovesouthpark 2009-07-03 . chapter 1I LOVE YOU
this is an awesome story! it was AMAZING!!i couldnt breathe i was laughing so hard! |
 Coconaur 2009-04-11 . chapter 1I would like to tell you a small story.
once upon a time, someone was just looking for a little thing to read to make them less bored.
somehow they stumbled onto this story.
when they read the first half of this story, their reaction was like so; they turned off the computer screen, turned off their music, fell back in their chair, and lastly, waved their wrists like a fucking idiot.
but, just cause this is south park, and things that are related to south park normally have an intensly hilarious ending, they read on, and when kyle transformed into Jame Gumb, they laughed their asses off, cause they thought it was only funny to make cartman do that.
Now they know that
1)ky is such a perverted whore uke
2)stan is vulnerable to twin sex
and
3)Jame Gumb is now funny as hell |
 naonaonao 2009-03-20 . chapter 1I THINK I LOVE YOU. Every single part of this was fucking amazing, it broke the fourth wall over and over and over again and I simply cannot begin to describe the amount of awesome I am feeling just from reading this. Rock on. |
 Cherryfizzies 2009-03-01 . chapter 1Omfg. I am still laughing out loud.
Kenny on the slip -n- slide had me laughing so hard i was almost in tears.
this is the greatest parody fic, ever. |
 Snodin 2009-01-25 . chapter 1LOL! |
 Bethany C. MacKenzie 2008-11-05 . chapter 1LOL *Dies*
As a matter of fact, I think I do know who this is directed at... hehe. And yes, most slash-fics are so overly cliched... not that it keeps people from reading them. :P
You win at writing parodies. WRITE MOAR. :D
- Beth M. |
 K. J. Pitre 2008-11-02 . chapter 1i dont know if i shud slap for breaking the 4th wall more times than i can count or if i shud let it be becuz u admitted ur faults in the story itself. it kinda confused me. i dunno.. u r to blame, tho, but u also put down that it was typical of slash fics and everything else. but still, that dusnt mean writing Style isnt fun ;)
PS: incest is NEVER sexy. IkexKyle and KylexKyle S. stories are never sexy. its gross. |
 The-Icon-Girl 2008-10-21 . chapter 1*dies in an exaggerated way*
Hahah, I was laughing like hell a by the end! I absolutley love this, eh! |
 Cardio Necrosis 2008-09-04 . chapter 1That was absolutely hysterical! I was snickering throughotu teh whoe lthing then at the end I laughed so hard my dad came in to ask what the hell I was laughing at and I told him; "Stan and Kyle fucking." He was all; "Dude, they're eight."
It was great when Stan was holding his cock for no reason for several paragraphs. I'm sure it would have been even funnier if I knew what author you were talking about but this is the first South Park fic I've read, so . . .
Absolutely loved the "blatant ripoff" that was great! |
 lx-Kisa-xl 2008-07-19 . chapter 1I lul'd for like. The whole five minutes it took me to read this. Cause I kept having to bury my face in a pillow. Cause all the sane people hate it when I laugh at the interwebs. -Adds on MSN- |
 LuvKyleAndStan 2008-07-18 . chapter 1Well, i was different, i will not lie. But not for the worst! I really liked it actually. lol |
 Anime Blob 2008-06-16 . chapter 1"You're not even ashamed of what you did."
"Why should I be? This is a slash story."
God, I have to say, you write some gold South Park fanfics. The lines I posted above have to be my favorite lines, that and the "Stan wasn't gay" lines. XD
Ben, this girl is tellin' you to keep up the writing! |
 Black Wolther 2008-06-02 . chapter 1lol
aweosme ^^ |
 Wolbachia 2008-06-01 . chapter 1I've no idea who the other author is, but that was still extremely funny. I lol'd. XD |