I love it. Maybe I'm a sucker for Scorp/Rose, but this was great. Oh and one thing, maybe don't switch around so much. It makes the reader a tad bit uncomfortable. Or at least it did for me.
But, besides that I love it! I can't wait to read the rest of the series!

Aw, this is adorable! I love the end, especially! :D

Strawberry xx

AW!

This is exactly how I imagine Rose to be, at the beginning, especially!

The only critism I can give you is that I think the ending seems perhaps a tad too rushed. Maybe it would have been nice to end it with a line from Albus, or something like that?

I dont know, but I really do like this.

I didn't read the prequel, but it wasn't necessary. This was short and sweet. I laughed at Rose's response to the letter. How adorable! I enjoyed the awkwardness of Scorpius's letter! Gah, I have to stop reading fluffy romance. It's getting to my head. But it's worth it.

Aww! So cute, I loved it.

aha awwie, Rosie's a heartbreaker xD
and wop Scorpy got guts =]
haha such a cute ending...well, im off to read that Love Forevermore story you mentioned =]
xoxox, Raf

Thats sweet

I loved it! Although it really doesn't have any "Shh...I'm reading" in it. Perhaps some of her dorm-mates could have been twittering on about something? But I love it. I look forward to "Love Forevermore" :D

This was a very short and sweet read. I enjoyed it immensly. While the whole running across the common room and snogging was a bit cliche (I've read too many HP stories on here, hehehe), it was done so cutely that I cannot help but grin. My favorite line would have to be "No one noticed, through his laughter, the desire in his eyes as Scorpius Malfoy watched Rose saunter off." That clearly explains everything about Scorpius feelings for Rose in his piece. And I just love imagining it too.

The only small pice of critique I have is with the letter. It seems to grown up and formal to be in such a sweet piece here. I mean, I'm not sure what year they are in, I'm guessing anywhere from 5th to 7th, but it sounded too formal and stiff to be from the mouth, er...pen, of a 15-17 year old boy. And maybe it's just because Scorpius was nervous and afraid of what Rose would think so thats why it's written that way. I'm not too thrilled with it but thats just my opinion. hehehe

But I did enjoy this piece and I think you explained things quite well without divelging into a lot of details as some stories do. Thanks for the great read! :)
-honda

AW. That was so sweet.

Aw, how very cute.
Not much for me to comment on, it was a very sweet read.

darn! i should have been faster reviewing... i wanted to be the first! oops. anyway, very cute story :D and i also like the writing style, better than HNFIL i say. i do think that he should have sent a letter to meet him somewhere or something instead of spilling his heart in a letter, in person is much better. but this works for the story and it is adorable!

Wow! A classic running snog, pulled off with perfection. I love the universe you've set up...it's how I like my Rose/Scorpius stories.