 Chibi Horsewoman 2008-07-09 . chapter 1Well okay not your best best best. But this was funny. And true because there are some seriously screwed up over the top psychotic Mary Sue induced fanfictions out there- trust me I've read them and try not to be them/
And yeah I loved Ron's story. Shortness be damned. And Sky's gonna get hit after Piff and LAyla |
 AngelofNicky 2008-06-20 . chapter 1I like it! Keep it up! |
 XV-Dragon 2008-06-03 . chapter 1Not much of a KP fan, but I liked the oneshot Darve. got a few good laughes out of it. |
 chiasypee 2008-06-03 . chapter 1Love the concept! And they way you went about doing this. This must be the first story I've seen with fanfiction in the plot that doesn't have anything to do with the main characters discovering (GASP) that there have been stories about them.
Ron's dialogue was very smooth, as well :) I can totally imagine Rufus and him saying all that stuff. |
 Donteatacowman 2008-05-31 . chapter 1Hey, this was good. As always, I could do without the minor swearing, but otherwise a cool story. I'm guessing you've suffered from the same writer's block as Ron, but you've managed to crank out an awesome oneshot. I'd give it an 8 out of 10. |
 screaming phoenix 2008-05-31 . chapter 1Not as easy as you think huh Ron?
P.S. I loved Larry's review |
 koolkame 2008-05-31 . chapter 1What are you talking about, that was brilliant! A fanfiction... parodying fanfiction. And it drew from the show well, Ron was in character as was Rufus and Larry (Rockets are go!)
It was funny and worthy of an award itself. I haven't seen so many cliches in a story since, well... Dark Gossamer Wings.
A great start for your new screen name. |
 Guardian's Light 2008-05-30 . chapter 1I resent Larry's comment. It labels most of my stories to a tee. I did like the story though, even if I didn't recognize you at first. The new name's going to take about a week to get used to for me most likely. Maybe not. And its true everyone suffers from writers wall. |