I love it.

TDH

I also read Gatsby for my English class, and I, too, loved the book.

There's so much imagery used--I can't wait to see what you do with character descriptions. =]

I like this fic, sounds interesting.

The Duelist's Heiress

WOW -- Good details .. you made the house seem so LIFELESS, DULL and spooky almost... i like it :D

i like how you added in a lot of COLORS in you're prologue
yay good job! :]